Born of Huangdi legend, shaping the world from big bangs of
Unstable combustible metal and deadly poisonous gas
Symbol of wealth, loyalty, friendship, and love
Keeper of covenants crystalized in elaborate cellars of glass.
Lot’s wife, turned pillar of salt, would soon face a double shame
Compared to a whole city, Taghaza, a work camp built of the same
But even this city of salt becomes eclipsed by the moon
Of majestical underground sites of salt chandeliers carved above a lagoon.
Worth your own salt in words and phrases myriad as the colors you display
Morphing shape for enhancing taste, pickling, curing, and preserving
Controlled by church and state, keeping evil spirits at bay
Monopolized and democratized, of mighty praise you are deserving.
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