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All You Absorb

Though your parents do intervene

By A. LenaePublished 11 months ago Updated 11 months ago 1 min read
Runner-Up in Sensational Challenge
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All You Absorb
Photo by Tania Melnyczuk on Unsplash

Are you of the mind, meatball divine,

that you’re here to be heavenly basted?

Cream cheese smears in the folds of your ears,

while you mouth a sock that’s giggle spit-pasted

Ritz cracker dust affixed to hints of nose crust,

so you inhale a white-sand butter beach

Then gaze at your fingers, where cat fur lingers,

as if bliss is now within your lush reach

Containing marigold zest against a grief-stricken chest,

you’ve hummed concertos between collarbone and prayers

Friendly thorns from the rose cause daddy to kiss your nose,

so you weave a flower crown from his mustache hairs

Morning sings through your skin like daylight on a dorsal fin,

once you wake and smell of steeped cotton ease

Mouth open wide for what the world can provide,

ingesting bugs as they ride a nuzzling breeze

Oh, meatball divine, soaked in the world’s brine,

do you devour so life won't pass you by?

Your experience of it all may expand and even stall,

but when you take a breath, you house the sky

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About the Creator

A. Lenae

I'm learning how to find the heart and describe it, often using metaphors. Thanks for reading.

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  • Mesh Toraskar9 months ago

    This is stunning! There are some absolutely astounding lines in here, for eg. "Containing marigold zest against a grief-stricken chest" and many more. Thanks for sharing and congratulations on making the list!!

  • Suze Kay11 months ago

    This is so beautiful! I got so many sensory ghosts in my head while reading. It made me feel nostalgia and appreciation for the beauty of life. Thank you for sharing this - I'm so glad it made the list!

  • Donna Renee11 months ago

    This one is really fun and clever! Congrats!!

  • Cathy holmes11 months ago

    Beautiful piece. Congrats.

  • Wow that was beautifully written. Not only an amazing flow to it, but you really do bring to life all the senses. Congratulations on getting runner up in the challenge!

  • Real Poetic11 months ago

    Very interesting. I love this.

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