Pretending to not catch sight of Him watching me,
I continue to talk with my friends from across the street...
Later on, I headed home.
He followed as I walked into the,
Springtime with those rainy nights...
He stepped up to me within the dunes of the silence.
I became absorbed by his Masculine fragrance, and
The streetlights shined inside my mentality...
Fading away the world to a place where only He and I exist...
my nerves shiver down to my toes.
I exhaled and Drew breath to the moment.
I wished for him to kiss me forever,
But Daylight broke the atmosphere
And our Romance came to be
A Bittersweet memory...
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Comments (12)
This was beautiful! I love that you played on the readers senses, it made this so relatable! Such a passionate poem! 💜
Very nicely done.
Hey, I love the atmosphere in this. Brilliant job! 😊
Lovely and heart-rending.
Amazing work!!!!
This one really brings out the emotions. Well done, Lonzo 💕🙂
The writing is evocative and beautifully captures the emotional complexities of a fleeting romantic encounter.😍🥰❤️👍
AWwww. I was so rooting for, ever into the sunset. Sigh, lovely.
I can understand a bittersweet memory . You are a natural poet .
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It's so sad when all good things have to come to an end. Very beautifully written!
This is beautiful ❤️