I once knew a woman named Beth
She had herpes and a penchant for meth
She ate all my food
and killed this one dude
but I still think she had beautiful breath
About the Creator
Kevin Rolly
Artist working in Los Angeles who creates images from photos, oil paint and gunpowder.
He is writing a novel about the suicide of his brother.
http://www.kevissimo.com/
FB: https://www.facebook.com/Kevissimo/
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Final Call
She flings her arms around my neck and squeezes me like she’s never going to let me go. My head spins as her lips brush against my cheek. She must be able to feel my heart thumping in my chest. I shuffle backwards and ram my hands into my coat pockets, watching her reach down and heave the rucksack across her shoulders.
By Caroline Craven6 days ago in Fiction
Comments (7)
This was the best!
Lol, this was hilarious!
I think she lives in my neighborhood. 🤣 Good one!
LOL I think you nailed it
Omg. Hahaha.
LOL!!!💖💖💕
Hahahahaha