A Wedding Toast from the Father of the Bride
The one I Didn't Get to Give
One of my daughter's lifelong curses is having a dad who thinks he's a writer. That being the case, when the first hint of her (second) wedding came up, this old fart had to start writing a toast to be given on the day. As it turned out, they eloped, with only a couple of friends in attendance, so I never got to recite it. Some people's kids!
(Feel free to read this in your best Irish Brogue!)
With heartfelt vows and tenets read
Your lives are now united
And I, for one,
To see it done
Could not be more delighted.
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A father's lot is to be there
Until no longer needed,
Then step aside
With pain and pride
And know his watch is ceded.
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My Princess, I have never left
My station unattended.
Although I know
You've thought it so,
You ne'er were undefended.
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But now I humbly pass the torch
To this good man beside you.
His heart is true
And I know you
Don't need my hand to guide you.
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My daughter's hand was never meant
For anyone but you, Sir.
Please, hold her tight
And treat her right
And never, ever lose her,
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For you have won the grandest prize
That e'er a man could vie for
And truth be told,
The heart you hold
At least one man would die for.
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So, here's to love and here's to life
And here's to yours together
To lofty heights
And starlit nights
And all the storms you'll weather.
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God bless you and the paths you walk.
May all your ills find healing
And all your tears
In coming years
Be from the joy you're feeling.
About the Creator
Dana Crandell
Dad, Stedpad, Grandpa, Husband, lover of Nature and dogs.
Poet, Writer, Editor, Photographer, Artist and Tech/Internet nerd. Content writer by trade. Vocal Creator by choice.
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Comments (5)
Aww! I wish my dad had done something like this! Beautiful!
It's so beautifully written.
This brought tears to my eyes. “The heart you hold at least one man would die for.” I lost all reason and cried.
Oh my. This is wonderful. Well done.
Hey, this was great!! You’ve really never recited it though?! You gotta find an excuse! Anniversary?