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Rather than being in the Dark!

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published about a year ago β€’ Updated about a year ago β€’ 1 min read

He crept through my window πŸͺŸ
Peeking through my blinds...

I'm aware of The Night but that's

When He hides...

Sweating and Glowing

I can see his glare

So, Bright, it Hurts
My eyes!

Lurking after me,

He threatened me to come outside...

I knew that I needed his

Radiant Energy...

Without How could I endure?

He helps me find my pride...

He's all around the world But He has Downtime...

I suppressed my Tears and Faught Against my Fears...

I was Trapped in the Darkness of Desperate Times, but from him, I Still Can't Hide...

I wonder if he knows my favorite color 🎨

I got up one morning and Seen His Yellow Smudge across my Bedroom Floor...

And I knew it was Time That I Revive.

I grabbed my Robe and Slippers on Too...

I came outside and Faced the Sky...

Hey Mr. Sun 🌞

Would you like to come along for the Ride?


Hey You guys thanks for Reading πŸ“– I Hope you Enjoyed Thanks for true Love and Likes!!!

I just wanted to remind you guys That God Made Sun Lightβ˜€οΈ and he could be Therapy for our minds and Body of Emotions...

Whenever I Feel the necessity I sit somewhere outside and Let him work his Enchantment Through My Body and Mind...

Yes, That's Right!
The Sun Is Medicine and we need him ALL THE TIME!!!!

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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)

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  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago


  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Wonderful! The sun makes everything better :)

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    this is beautiful. well done.

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Yes!! We do need the sun, and it really is therapeutic to soak up those rays. Wonderfully written and a joy to read ;)

  • Tiffany Gordon about a year ago

    I absolutely love this! it is so Flyyly-written & inspirational! Well done my friend!!

  • Rick Henry Christopher about a year ago

    Fantastic. I love how you make a twist at the end. Good job!!!

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  • A wonderful poetic solar tribute

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    Wow! What an awesome way to acknowledge and show respect to something we all need. Loved this! and Hearted.

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