A Mystery Crime Thriller
Solved in an unexpected way
Another day, another reason to want to escape reality
Through opening up the magical pages of a good book,
I find the older the writing, the better I’m able to escape
As only the best stories survive, so they’re worth a look.
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This book I’ve chosen today is old, practically ancient
So I’m excited to see the adventure it will teleport me,
Will it be a world way off on another planet, possibly
Or off to a future decade or two, we will wait and see.
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The book is so old that the title is no longer readable
So I carefully turn the first few yellow stained pages,
To find the title of a story that’s set in a country town
I’m engrossed as each chapter sets multiple stages.
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It’s written about a small boy abducted from his home
By who, I do not yet know but I do have my suspicions,
Could it be by his father, or someone wanting a child
Or a spur of the moment, due to the right conditions?
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Page after page, I’m lost in this poor little boy’s world
Emotionally invested as if I was involved in the tale,
I’m wishing for his rescue, as is his friends and family
When the police discover a ransom request in the mail.
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This story takes an unbelievable twist, unexpectedly
As a witch is called on to cast a spell, an effort to aid,
She sits on the family’s front lawn, green and luscious
Working her magic spell for which she has been paid.
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Movement of some kind can be seen in front of her
As a private army of insects, bright red lady bugs,
Each hard shell on their back covered in polka dots
Highlighting their armour which is as red as blood.
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They scatter to the winds, in every single direction
Looking for the necessary clues of this abduction,
Each teeny tiny bug will smell out the toddler’s scent
Once found they’ll take onboard the new instruction.
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The kidnapper’s in for a surprise as they overrun him
And send messages and directions back to the witch,
The police descend and place him under house arrest
The little boy’s delivered back home without a hitch.
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About the Creator
Colleen Millsteed
My first love is poetry — it’s like a desperate need to write, to free up space in my mind, to escape the constant noise in my head. Most of the time the poems write themselves — I’m just the conduit holding the metaphorical pen.
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Comments (3)
Love it 😍
This is great. Can't believe I'm just finding it now.
Another brilliant poem from you. Loved the concept of the witch using the lady bugs. Loved this storypoem!