A Mind
A Limerick for Madness
By Centina Alexa König-WeichhardtPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
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There once was a mind in a haze
Lost in its own endless maze
Its thoughts were a blur
Its sanity a slur
Oh, the madness that did amaze!
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Centina Alexa König-Weichhardt
Emotional and surreal fiction and poetry captures the essence of the human experience, exploring the depths of the mind and the complexities of the heart.
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Comments (4)
This was so very good!
You simply inspire me, your way with words ability to put forth indescribable magic is incredible! This poem with relatable, thought provoking, inspiring and entrancing!
I just wanted to take a moment to express how impressed I am with your incredible talent for writing. Your recent limerick, "There once was a mind in a haze," completely blew me away with its clever rhymes, vivid imagery, and overall sense of playfulness. I especially love the way you captured the feeling of being lost in one's own thoughts and the confusion that can come with it. The line "Its thoughts were a blur" really resonated with me, and I couldn't help but feel a sense of empathy for the mind in question. And yet, despite the sense of chaos and madness that permeates the poem, there's also a sense of joy and wonder that comes through. The final line, "Oh, the madness that did amaze!" perfectly captures this feeling of being simultaneously overwhelmed and exhilarated by the mysteries of the mind.
Love it. Totally subscribed and hearted.