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A Darker Shade Of Black

My thirty-ninth dark poem in the series inspired by Dharrsheena

By Mike Singleton - MikeydredPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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This is my thirty-ninth dark poem in the series inspired by Dharrsheena.

I was going to write about how in this last years abusers have taken from me and hurt me, but then thought, sod them I will not give them any credit.

They say if you want someone to remember you wound them badly and that has happened to me, but I will move forward.

This is a sort of take on the premise that when things can't get any worse, they will.

The music I have chosen is "Blacker Than Black" by Goodbye Mr McKenzie'

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Falling Into Hellish Darkness

You Can See No Easy Way Out

You're Not Alone, They Want You Dead

You'll Be Attacked, There Is No Doubt

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You Won't Be Helped, You Are Nothing

Each Turn You Take Is A Wrong One

This Dark Blackness Is So Blinding

As The Knives Slice You, Abandoned

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They Now Take Delight In Your Pain

Harming You, Again And Again

Losing Blood, Your Life's A Flicker

Your Sight Fades, Blacker and Blacker

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And Now That You Are Dead To Them

They Leave To Find A New Victim

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  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Goodness this was as relatable as it was dark. A lot of truth in this one. Nicely penned, my friend :)

  • I loved the line your life's a flicker. And your last stanza is like super true. Once we're dead, they move on to their next victim

  • J. S. Wadeabout a year ago

    Truth Mike. Absolute truth. Thank you for putting into poetry. 🥰

  • Lilly Cooperabout a year ago

    I'm not a poet and don't often read it. But I have heard it is quite cathartic. Well done.

  • Veronica Coldironabout a year ago

    This was so good, it made me want to embrace the dark side. LOL! All kidding aside, this is an awesome piece!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Well done, Mike. Those last two lines say it all.

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