what I'm about to say, girl
might come as a surprise
but I need to make it obvious
because I can't get you off my mind
being near you makes me feel safe
oh goodness your touch would make me weak
I dream of little moments with you
getting through life, just us two
existing with you is ecstasy
that is my universal truth
stars shine a little brighter
life seems a little deeper
excitement more real when I can share it with you
I look forward to getting to know the deepest parts of your soul
and appreciating the little quirks that make you
is what I'm feeling obvious now
do you trust that this is real
that your heart is safe with mine
There is only one way to prove it
About the Creator
Hufflecup
I want nothing more than to dedicate my life to writing, so I figured I would start here to test the waters. I will be submitting stories to as many communities as possible.
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When We Were Very Young
In another box set that my parents got me when I was younger contained four books by A.A. Milne. 'When We Were Very Young' is a collection of poems that Milne wrote for his son Christopher Robin. This is a book that is full of references to Mr. Edward Bear, but a lot of the poems give some various descriptions of life of a very young child and where, when, how and why they do what they do. The illustrations are quite cute for you can see what Christopher Robin is and may be thinking. Also, Pooh Bear does make his self-known at various points. I have read these verses many, many times over the years and each time make me feel good about myself.
By Mark Graham6 days ago in Critique
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Beautiful!