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it's getting late three of us are
returning after attending a wedding
ceremony of an office colleague three of
us mean me Ratan and Su shovin on the
one hand were such great friends on the
other hand there are many differences of
opinion between us whenever we three sit
together we start to argue on various
topics especially Ratan and Su shovin
Ratan is an atheist he wants to verify
every inch of the world with rationalism
and Su shovin is a very pious man we got
up in the empty compartment su shovin
said look this is called luck do you
understand now rafen that was the
beginning of the debate good luck bad
luck then the discussion went to
astrology Ratan is dismissing everything
as a hoax and a superstition and Su
Chauvin is making a counter statement
such witch astrologer made predictions
in which country and in which year etc
Ratan is trying to refute all the
details with all the sharp arguments and
me I'm trying to support them both
sometimes I'm shaking my head for Rothen
and sometimes for su shovin in today's
debate Rathlin is in a win-win situation
he said listen to this day no one has
been able to speak accurately about the
future everything that seems to have
matched is a loose assumption the whole
thing is cleverly wrapped up it could be
X or it could be Y that's the technique
of explaining everything people who have
faith in astrologers are impressed by
those rules that's how it works
so you're saying the future cannot be
predicted just then a man speaks up from
the other side of the compartment the
three of us looked back wrath and
measured the man from head to toe the
man is sitting with his body covered
with a gray black sheet his face is
filled with a white beard the age is not
definite but it must be around 60 he has
a dirty bag with him at first glance
it's not strange to think that he's a
bag bond or crazy the man put the sheet
aside and came towards us Rothen said in
a slightly diagonal manner what do you
think in the future be predicted yes
Shakespeare said many things happen in
this universe that are beyond our
comprehension we know all these things I
want to hear from you what's your
opinion the man stared at rather than
for a moment then he smiled a little to
be honest there is one thing in this bag
that I can show you and after you see
that you might change your mind
sooo Chauvin seemed very excited are you
an astrologer no I'm just an ordinary
guy I can show you something that I
learned by the grace of my guru if you
wish to see oh okay so now you'll bring
out a skull and tell us the future using
that skull right uh uh-huh no it's not
like that I can only draw I can draw a
little bit I don't get it what to draw
the future I can draw the future
I can draw any man's future portrait I
can show you the picture of the age you
want to see everyone is silent then su
Chauvin said very interesting huh
interesting this is a new kind of
cunning all bogus
I stopped rapping and looked at the man
he picked up his bag he said there was
something in the bag you have drawing
tools in that bag the tools are nothing
more than a drawing pad and a pencil my
guru gave me that as a gift who is your
guru by the way the man who could give
such a powerful gift he must be a
world-famous guy and you also this
learning is not for money or fame but
it's allowed to show the disbelievers
and speaking of my guru you will not
recognize him he lived a solitary life
away from the locality the train was
crossing a bridge cold wind was blowing
in the soft light there's a creepy
atmosphere in the train compartment and
the words coming out of that man gave me
a shiver he is saying that he can draw a
portrait of the future how is that
possible how do you draw these portraits
and you see those images the man shook
his head means yes the picture floats
when I closed my eyes and touch the
pencil on the pad I can draw it
immediately then draw a portrait of one
of us okay
draw mine now would I look like at the
age of 60 to 70
doesn't work like that you have to ride
on this pad any future time year date
even hours and minutes eternity is
eternal specify a point the man took out
a pad and a pencil and proceeds towards
the shovin but the calculation in his
mind he wrote on top of the pad 20th of
August which means he will be 76 years
old then write more such hours and
minutes sue Shelvin looked at us and
smiled a little then wrote at 9:15 p.m.
he will just draw up a random picture I
was looking at the man from the
beginning the man gently touches the
pencil on the pad and stares at Sue
shovin and then slowly the two eyelids
are coming down ice if he's hypnotizing
and falling asleep surprisingly the man
starts to draw on the pad with his eyes
closed
how long did it take not even a minute
the man opens his eyes he extends the
pat towards su shovin the three of us
leaned over there's a picture of an old
man he's bald wrinkles all over the face
like a spider's web it glasses on the
eyes I don't know much about painting
but I have to say that the man is very
good at it
only a few strokes of the strong line I
brought the picture to life but the
question is is this really soo Chauvin
how can you prove that he would look
like that in the future there are no
signs of tooth decay yet and there's no
guarantee that the face would be like
such a dried fruit
he might get fat at that time I also
have the same suspicion but it's not
possible to prove the accuracy of this
picture at this moment well I have to
wait 40 years to prove whether it really
matches or not no we don't have to wait
40 years what he draws is 100% accurate
oh I see you have a vision of the future
now listen I saw my grandfather he died
seven years ago everyone says I look
exactly like him I saw a picture of his
young age he looks exactly the same as
me he also had dense hair on his head he
died at the age of 78 I don't believe it
you want to put me down that's why
you're making up such stories no no not
at all
believe me I I can take you to my
uncle's house and show you the picture
no I want to decide it now rathas John
tighten he turned to me and said let him
draw your portrait I know you'll be
honest about it me I mean the way
Rathbun said I had no choice but to
hesitate and write the same date on a
white page of the pad sushi oven and I
are the same age so I'll sit would look
like him at the age of 75 to 76 let's
see how the picture looks like
the man closes his eyes but this time
the pencil did not move there was not a
single stain on the white paper I looked
at the man with questioning eyes the man
looked at me for two to three seconds
and slowly shook his head left and right
what what's wrong it's blank no picture
of that age can be seen why can't the
picture be seen the man bowed his head
no answer
Ratan said with a poisonous smile that
means you don't dare to face it anymore
No hold on a second do you mean I will
not live to that age that's why you
didn't see the picture yes Wow excellent
now we're talking alright let's reduce
the date to two or five years you'll
definitely see a picture for sure also
we can find out when he will die draw
five to seven times and you'll get an
accurate result am i right the man
raised his head and looked at ratha then
said no you're wrong I can only draw a
picture of a man once I can't do it a
second time really and draw a portrait
of mine give me the pad I'm writing down
the time month and date the man pushed
the pad forward wrath and wrote on the
pad on 26th of June 2020 Rothen Hey
you have to write a time in the future
this is today's date wait brother
Ratan smiled then he looked at his watch
10:45 p.m.
eleven o'clock at night now let's see
what I would look like after 15 minutes
no more guessing before we get off the
train it'll prove that you're lying or
not the man looked at Rafa then he
closes his eyes and almost immediately
opened his eyes the pencil did not move
a bit my heart was pounding so Chauvin
made a faint scream and Ravan stood up
he's shaking what do you mean I I
couldn't see the picture what I mean I
didn't get to see the picture what do
you want to say I'll die after 15
minutes I'm not saying anything but if
the picture does not appear on the paper
that it means yes
alright I'll get off to the next station
I'm sorry for bothering you all know
you'll have to resolve it you have to
admit that you're a fraud you were
trying to deceive us by telling lies
wratten's fist tightening and his
forehead veins swelled the man went to
the door and stood there the train is
crossing another bridge
the compartment is shaking lights are
fading wrath and gritted his teeth see
how the thief is trying to escape the
man looked up in the rumble we heard him
say 15 minutes is not over yet
oh so you're not done wait
I'll teach you a good lesson Ratan made
angry roars and went towards the man he
was about to punch that guy but the man
moved away from the door and Ratan we
saw him stumble on an iron that was high
on the floor and bailed through the door
and just then the Train shook violently
and at the same time the lights went out
a scream for a second process and slowly
blew into the air we sat motionless the
bridge ends the train is running on the
hard ground
lights come back there's no one at the
door
neither Rathod nor the man it's just the
wind the train is running fast I looked
into my watch it's 11 o'clock at night
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