Revenge of the Filth With No Backup
An Epic Battle Fought Sitting On My Ass
The problem is the dirty ones.
At beginnings, they flash-smile out and exude innocence, shining necessary practicality. And I fall for it. A classic dependable mark every time. For a moment my mind conjures options—all of them delicious—ruined by the sea of obviously not clean dishes on not just one counter but every counter space stretched out in front of me to infinity.
I create a lounge chair in the comfy green softback from a distance by throwing my legs askew, sprawled right and bent backward left with no regard whatsoever about spinal support. Right now, I’m human Jello and disapproving eyes on disgusting targets. Not the feels today, so ain’t moving from this chair.
‘Any-country-equal-opportunity’ stand-off.
Let’s do this.
Got water bottle, fruit, protein energy bars, and bathroom access.
Bring. It. On.
See if I care.
It’s quiet at first.
Quiet at second too.
The rules of engagement. The ultimate stare-down contest. Time passage is grime passage. Hours of day and night tangled in a despicable conglomerate web of daylight-saving hours that leave only greyness and darkness and don’t save shit.
No time-lapse necessary, as I can’t miss the hardening of Saturday’s spice ginger oatmeal in the pot, remains of coconut rice noodles mixed in Quorn pieces with fresh mushrooms and petit pois on dinner plates becoming impromptu mime understudies effective in imitating eternal British sick-grey skies.
There’s no space left.
I mind-meld project with non-tested Vulcan powers.
There are low-level chuckles in return.
Be creepy why don’t ya?! Not cool dudes.
I’d like to imagine I’ve gone ‘nose-blind,’ but nope, this stench permeates.
The hardball play: I’m gonna obliterate these dishes or suffocate on mildew-molded-stuck swarms of flies trying.
Cereal bowls stack higher and higher—What the—???
Muted door openings and closures over my razor-sharp focus and uncountable days in seamless succession…
…I still own a teenager who eats but must be reminded a gazillion times to wash the dishes. A new bowl and glass every drink and every snack. Explanation, reason, and practicality ad finitum graciously heard and quickly forgotten.
How all this started. I tired.
*Grrr*
*Eyes now narrow slits*
My end strategy of throwing the filthy miscreants into the garbage won’t materialize if they splinter to the floor on account of unsupportable heights. They’ve become a larger-than-life bar graph capitalizing on mathematic principles but banking on window visibility by the neighbors. That and the fact I have a ceiling. Someone could legitimately think there’s been a medical emergency in my apartment. An abduction. A maniacal chef de partie who would never *gasp* deign to wash the dishes. This is already ugly, but it could get *gulp* ‘socially interactive’ ugly.
A metal mix of utensils smile with what might be last month’s stuck-on gluten-free gravy smugness and throw up a faint raspberry. The frying pan answers like a musical refrain,”Ffthbbt-fftbbbbt!”
I count my breaths as seconds in the momentary pause before a cacophony erupts from casserole dishes to ramekin bowls that hold desserts long forgotten, as a chorus reaches crescendos.
“Fffthbbt-ffthbt-tt-ffbbbbbbbbbbbbtt-ffbt-ffbt-ffttbbttttttt!”
“Oh no you—”
“—Fffffffffffbbt-tt-tttt-fffffffffffbbbbbbbbbbbbbt!”
Defiance has taken over even my kitchen sink, mocking me where I lounge, taunting and teasing, emboldened by sheer numbers, volume, and stink. It’s an equal opportunity vermin call, and mind playing tricks or not, I hear a rustle outside the open window.
The dishwashing liquid is already a viscous state of terror, spigot cap with distinctive brand label a cry of desperation, about to lose it if I don’t step in. And the dish towels look no better. They’ve been surreptitiously sliding down the rail to grab some distance but progression was slow going.
The scouring pad is obvious fury. Stray metallic strands picking up electrical charge in the kitchen’s heavy ionized atmosphere and determined to kick dish ass if only I could “Get up off that derrière,” and “Help goddammit!”
Those filthy plastic containers, platters, mugs, trays, saucers, boiler pans froth-eject what used to be food, now slimy bacterium colonies, mold spores, and new strains gelatinous and unidentifiable in “ffthhbbbt-fbbbbtt” spit-spew everywhere. The last thing I remember is the piercing shrill of the dishcloth, agonizing and torturous, threatening to split my eardrums as I jump to my feet on reflex.
The water is steamy hot with a mountain of suds.
Every kitchen cleaning implement I own tells me how “stupid that was” and that “there are better ways to fight.” Sound is muffled. I’ve improvised a hazmat suit out of trash bags, rubber gloves, face mask, and goggles. There’s noise with every movement but when I hear the bedroom door open, I lightning-whack a wet sponge in that direction with the pinpoint accuracy only channeled rage can give, and it closes. Teacups that snicker about it get immediately suffocated with plant-based, biodegradable dish detergent bubbles, their gurgles of protest silenced as I eyeball the drinking glasses next and think maybe, just maybe…sometime next week…I might be finished.
Hell.
It’s always the dirty ones.
Thank you for reading my story in response to James & Oneg's Summer Writing Challenge Extravaganza prompt!
It stretched me beyond stretchy as I don't do horror, but I do 'Writer Family' who specifically requested it, soooo...laugh at my efforts and write your own. The "Beware the Mundane" prompt requires you to write a horror story about a non-scary mundane task/object. Go ahead! Get your imagination on!
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By The Dani Writer8 months ago in BookClub
household destroying magic
This incident was experienced by a woman who had a dark past and because of her past grudges, Sari became the person who hurt fellow women. One day, when Sari was in high school class, Sari met a boy and the boy became Haya's explanation is that she had been in a relationship for quite a long time, at that time S always went home and even went to school with her boyfriend until one day S had an accident, meaning that Sari was pregnant out of wedlock. Her pregnancy was with her boyfriend because Sari and her boyfriend had an open relationship. until finally she was admitted, she was danguk dielas The last three semesters of graduation and her pregnancy was not told to her parents or even her closest friends because Sari was afraid of telling her parents, therefore Sari hid it to herself so the story ended until Sari finally graduated from school but not yet known by the teachers or even her friends because at that time Sari's stomach was not very big after graduating from school. Sari was still unemployed and the shape of her stomach was getting bigger, which is called a carcass. If she hides it, it will definitely be smelled too, that's the saying about S's pregnancy being stolen by her mother because S felt stomach ache and The path is no longer the same as before when you were still a virgin until finally you groaned in pain in your stomach, you were sick, asked her mother, but Sari was just silent and didn't answer her mother's question, but Sari's mother still continued to ask Sari various questions. Mother, look at your path too. It's just different, your stomach also looks bulging now, why are you Sari? Help me wash it with my mother. She was screaming at her mother because of her mother's screaming. That's why she finally told her mother honestly, I'm pregnant, ma'am. I was pregnant by a man, but the man didn't want to take responsibility, instead he ran away. I don't know where, S Astagfirullah said, her mother said. Finally, from that incident, her mother didn't allow Sari to leave the house. She was at home with her mother. Her mother never went to the neighbors or went out shopping, she rarely even mingled with the neighbors because it was to cover up her child's pregnancy. So her mother came along. hiding herself until one day Sari's pregnancy was getting bigger and Sari was going to give birth that night Sari was moaning in pain feeling pain in her stomach, it seemed like Sari was having contractions and in the end that night Sari was taken by her mother to the hospital because she was going to give birth in a shared car. with her father, Sari was taken to the hospital at a very fast rate. The short story is that Sari gave birth to her child, but the child will later be looked after by Sari's parents so that her neighbors don't make fun of Sari. Her child is raised by her parents. It's a coincidence that Sari is a child. So now both parents will look after their child and the neighbors don't even know that it's Sari's biological child. The neighbors know that it's Sari's parents' child because all this time her mother never went out, right? That's how it is. Well, if you're shopping for for her daily needs, she always goes straight to the supermarket for her monthly needs, so her neighbors don't have the slightest suspicion and don't make any noise, of course, until one day Sari looks for work and wanders out of town. Sari stays in a boarding house alone. Sari applies and looks for work here and there and ends up Finally, Sari got a call to work as a secretary in an office. In that office, Sari worked with all her heart and in that office, Sari now got new friends and a new atmosphere. While working, Sari saw a man who was older than Sari. That's around 30 years old while Sari is still around 20 years old. Sari also asked her co-worker, Suci Ci, who is that? Do you know or not? Ask Sari. That's the manager in this office. Why do you like him? Ask Suci. Is it true that he's handsome and rich? Unfortunately he already has one. Suci's wife and children still look young, Tamban. Be very careful about your day, don't mess around. The family is very harmonious and happy, but Sari just smiled in surprise at Suci, what is Ci's name? His name is Pak Jaya. After their conversation, Sari and Suci continued their work duties. After work, Sari was waiting for the public transportation bus for Sari to go home. While Sari was waiting for the public transportation in front of the bus stop in front of her office, suddenly a car came to Sari's side. Sar was shocked. The person in the car opened the car window slowly. land and how surprised Sari was when she saw that in the car was Mr. Jaya, her manager, who Sari admired for his good looks Hey Sari said Mr. Jaya. Sari was surprised when Mr. Jaya called her name because how did Mr. Jaya know her name was Sari, even though the two of them had never met Sari. smiled shyly at Mr. Jaya, come on, get on Sari, I'll take you home, OK, Mr. Jaya said no, sir, thank you, the members will come in a moment, okay, Nai, it's already afternoon, transport rarely passes here, it'll be a hassle, Dad, not at all, Sari, finally Sari came along. riding in his car Pak Jaya in Pak Jaya's car asking to chat with Sari where are you at Sari's house I'm here wandering sir So I live in a boarding house which is enough for me to live in Oh that's right where the boarding house is there Sir it's about 20 minutes away Oh yes why do you know my name, do you know where it comes from? Oh, that's from you. I asked you for your name. I said Mr. Jay Punsungibu. Turns out it was his work friend who told me that. Don't call me. Don't call me Jay Pakliatali. I JAT. Diat seb hand hpendkan hpsuk keumah [Music] O J, who he was admiring, suddenly Sari's hand rang with a message notification. S immediately opened the message and it turned out that the contents of the message were from Jayaak. Sari finally answered the phone from Jaya. They chatted happily on the phone until late at night. Short story. The next morning, Sari went to the office and was picked up by Jaya because last night they both had promised to go together. Jaya called Sari to her boarding house and then they went to the office. In the office, all eyes were on Sari and Jaya because everyone was surprised that Mr. Jaya was leaving with Sari, who is the secretary. Moreover, Mr. Jaya already has a wife and children, but Sari didn't pay much attention to this. When he arrived at his desk, Suci immediately asked Sari that you were leaving with Mr. Jaya Yes, Ci, he picked me up yesterday afternoon and I was taken home. Wow, you're crazy. Don't keep going on like that. Then everyone in the office will talk about you, especially since Mr. Jaya already has a wife and children. You want to be an actor, but Sari doesn't answer anything. What Suci said yesterday was that when I was in the toilet I ran into Mr. Jaya. He asked your name but it turned out he instead invited you to go home yesterday. Suci said Oh I see. Yes. They went home together and continued their work which was waiting at their desk during working hours. Suddenly Mr. Jaya sent a message to Sari. In the end, Sari also replied to Mr. Jaya's message so that Sari's work was slightly delayed because Sari was busy replying to messages. In the afternoon when she came home from the office. Sari was brought back by Jaya. Sari and Jaya. When they got home in the car, they promised to go on a date at the park, ouch, ouch, and coincidentally that night was Saturday night, so Mr. Jaya and Sari would meet in the park. S also accepted Mr. Jaya's invitation after arriving. S's boarding house immediately took a shower because tonight he was going to meet Jaya. Meanwhile at Jaya's house, his wife asked him something. Where are you going, Mas Tumben, you're really neat, you're wearing clothes for a while, so be careful, okay? You answered, Mrs. Karin. Mrs. Karin doesn't have the slightest suspicion. to Mr. Jaya Mr. Jaya and Mrs. Karin have two children, a girl and a boy, their first child is named Galang, who is 12 years old. Galang is already in the 6th grade of elementary school, while their last child is a girl, Gina. Gina is still 7 years old. Gina is sitting in class. 1 Pak Jaya Elementary School has a very large and luxurious house. In the house there are servants and security guards and there is a gardener who cleans the garden behind the house and also in the front garden because the condition of the house is very spacious and big. Long story short, that night Sari and Jaya finally met in a city park before they met Mr. Jaya picked them up first at Sari's shop, they met and sat on a park bench facing Jalan Raya. The atmosphere of the city park that night was very busy with lots of delicious food sellers and it was fun just hanging out with Jaya. said goodbye to S to go to his car, he was taken to Taman yangangatudak Jang Lag and Pak jet yangang di bangan him Ma sebah Bung serinc to be given to say his love for S S all this time I've been watching you and I've been watching you Kamuak [Music] so acuay karba just jayatak his love for S However, because I was comfortable and with Jay, I finally brushed J [Music] and Miki, I's child. I answered that J was at a loss and in the end, Mere went hungry quietly, nothing remained. boarding house because at the moment Suci has moved from the boarding house, now Suci has moved to the boarding house next to Sari. So now the two of them are always together and when they go to the office Suci goes with Sari and Jaya, they do their monthly shopping together, bringing a trolley for their shopping at the m-ak was with his wife and two children who were both shopping when he saw the harmony and happiness of his family. Jaya Sari was very cynical when he saw it because Sari felt jealous and her heart felt tight even though Sari knew that Jaya already had a wife and two grown children. Jaya and Karin Previously, they married young, so they already had a child who was already 12 years old. When Jaya saw Sari in the W, Suci pretended not to see her and didn't know because Jaya was afraid that his wife would find out. At that time, Suci already found out that Sari was already in a relationship. with Jaya Sari, her child is very stubborn so she doesn't want to listen to what Suci says at all because she can't stand seeing the harmony of her household. Jaya finally Sari asks Suci to leave that place Ci Let's get out of here it's hot in here Ah, you're just like that, it's hot There's a risk of you having a relationship with someone else's husband, never mind. Let's go somewhere else. Finally, Sari and Suci left the corridor and moved to another corridor. Then Sari sent a message to Jaya who was seen having lunch at a cafe in the mall. Mas, don't do it. be affectionate with him, right? I'm getting hot is pesar. Sorry, I do n't want to be suspicious. Sar answered Jaya because she couldn't bear to see the harmony of her boyfriend's family. In the end, Sari and Suci went home to their room. Long story short, one time Jaya and Karin were always fighting, I don't know. what is being debated by Mrs. Karin, she feels suspicious of her husband because every night Mr. Jaya always smiles to himself in front of his cellphone screen as if he is in love, but Mrs. Karin doesn't want to ask her husband about this every day off work. Jaya and Sari are always alone. Inviting Sari to go for a walk or meet up and enjoy her holiday. At that time, when Sari and Jaya were walking at the mall, Mrs. Karin saw that her husband was walking with Sari. At that time, Mrs. Karin was shopping for clothes with her friend. Mrs. Karin saw her husband making out with a woman there. a cafe in the mall finally opened, with his emotions already running high, he took Aram Bu Langs Mabrakak J and that's the end of it, he's hit you hard, Ma'am Suas is there, KIS, and to you, Jay, you, who is he? [Music] Sari he's my girlfriend, the answer was immediately Mrs. Karin's tears couldn't be stopped anymore. Why do you have the heart, bro? You already have a wife and children. You didn't think about that. You've hurt me, let's go home, let's talk at home, don't be here, be embarrassed, be shy, why are you embarrassed, bro? Just having an affair, don't be embarrassed to answer, not get angry because the situation is getting heated up. In the end, Mere everyone went home in their car. Jaya Sari and Mrs. Karin were in the same car. what she brought How hurt was Mrs. Karin's heart seeing in front of her her husband walking with another woman and the woman sitting next to him. Jaya, the position that should have been occupied by Mrs. Karin was devastated. Her heart was very broken, especially since Mrs. Karin was in the same car as her shameless mistress. Mrs. Karin was still crying. sobbing because how devastated and hurt her heart was to see her husband cheating, which all this time had never crossed her mind, Mrs. Karin, that her husband could be so heartless as to cheat on Mrs. Karin, when she arrived at Mrs. Karin's house, she immediately asked Mr. Jaya and Sari, you have been in a relationship since When it's only S months, Mr. Because Mrs. Karin is so angry and hurt, don't take your cup, Sir, this kind of violence will lead to Pak Jaya breaking up his wife and Sari. You girl has no self-respect, a cheap girl, Ganjen, said Bukarin to Sari, then Pak Jaya immediately took Sari away and went home to Sari's house. groaning in pain in the car because his cheek still hurts from the slap from Mrs. Karin. I'm sorry, my wife, Sari. Say, Mr. Jaya is sick, you know, Mas. Sari answered in a spoiled way. You just calm down, I'll tap you. I said, Mr. Jaya, it's true, Mas. Yes, you are. Just calm down. Then finally Mr. Jaya and S arrived at the boarding house and said that Mr. Jaya and Mrs. Karin's family was getting more and more messy and not as harmonious as before. Now Mrs. Karin has become indifferent to Mr. It's extremely hurt because Mr. J is now more busy playing with his cell phone, sending messages to each other. to his mistress, so Mrs. Karin no longer cared about it. Even so, Mr. Jaya didn't want to break off his relationship with Sari, his mistress, because Mr. Jaya didn't want to leave Mrs. Karin and also didn't want to lose Sari. One day, Sari spoke to Jaya in a café asking about relationship with Jaya, Mas. When do you want to marry me? Are you serious about me? Yes, you'll be patient first, OK? But you're really going to marry me, right? the boss because Sari has never taken leave. Sari also invites Suci to take leave. Ci, we'll take leave later, right? So far we haven't had leave, says Sari. Yes, where are you going to take leave? Ask Sari. Come on, come with me. I'll take you somewhere. without refusing his invitation, Sari Suci just followed Har and said to her boss for the next day where [Music] Hariajan which is far away, we are at home [Music] never mind, just keep quiet, don't talk too much, come with me, he said he wanted me to hear what he said. It was said by S that they were on the way because Mere Mer was very sleepy. Until an hour later Mere woke up and Mere was already at term and looked for public transportation that took the road to the remote part of the village to the witch doctor's house. The journey was tortuous and there were lots of forests on either side of the road. because the house of the casual shaman is in a remote part of the village. The trip to the remote area of the witch doctor's house took about 1 hour. Some time later, Sari and Suci finally arrived at the house of the witch doctor. It looked like the house was very quiet and dark. The house of the relaxing shaman was still made of cubicles. bamboo and the floor was still made of clay. Sari and Suci went to the terrace of her house and tried to knock on the door, tok tok, Assalamualaikum, said Sari. A few moments later, a greeting was heard from behind the door. Waalaikumsalam, the answer was seen by the shaman who opened the door and welcomed Sari and Suci with a smile. [Music] ak mah du puns go into his house mah shaman sits on a chair made from his own [Music] What's wrong with you guys coming Ki so I'm here to take my revenge on someone and I want that person to die along with his family take a photo of the target or don't bring it Mbah answered Sari while giving her the photo she had taken from her bag, then Mbah Dukun invited Si and Suci to enter the room where the ritual was being carried out. You also went into the s and Suci Puniku. What did Mbah Dukun say to come into her room during the danciasukiuangan? The atmosphere was very tense. all the interiors in the room were black and when she entered the room, Sari and Suci smelled the smell of Anjir that hit her nose. In the room, there were lots of sacred objects, such as Pocongan doll keris and scary Javanese paintings, the pictures of Sari and Suci. I got goosebumps when I was in the room and there were also kuci-kuci needles on the table in the room where the ritual was held and there were several offerings and flowers of seven kinds. The name of this person, who is Karina Mbah, the shaman then prepared a jar made of clay and burned incense in it. on the key, when the incense had been burned, Mbah Shaman immediately cast his spell on the incense and the photo of Mrs. Karin was tied to a pocongan doll and then stabbed using a sharp needle. was chanting the spell. The air that was felt in the room turned very tense. Sari and Suci felt goosebumps when they felt a strong wind coming into the room and several paintings in the room fell to the ground. Suddenly, Sari and Suci were shocked when they were talking. chanting the spell, suddenly many figures of creatures appeared in front of him. Sari and Suci made Sari and Suci very afraid because in front of him there was the figure of Genderuwo Kuntilanak, the figure of Pocong standing behind his body, Mbah Shaman Suci, who was unable to see the figures. Finally, he fainted, but Suci was still left unconscious on the spot until finally Suci woke up on her own after 15 minutes. Finally Suci came to her senses. When Suci realized that the figures were no longer in front of her, Suci also felt relieved because the figures had disappeared. These figures will then be sent to Mrs. Karin and her two children. Bring this land. Then you will give it to the people in the house while giving a plastic bag containing soil. What is this soil, Mbah, is it burial soil? The burial soil is what will make the family slowly -Then die one by one, OK, Mbah. I'll carry out Mbah's orders. Good. After everything is finished, Ms. Shaman allows Sari and Suci to go home. Go home and do what I said earlier. Finally, Sari and Suci come home with the burial ground that Mbah Dukun has given them. by taking public transportation from remote areas to the city. When they arrived in the city of Sari and Suci, they immediately boarded the bus to return to their city. The journey took around 6 hours. They returned home by taking a short bus. The story of Sari and Suci finally arrived at the boarding house, but while they were walking towards Melat, if behind her body there is a figure following her, she shuddered at that, behind you there is a figure following you but she just smiles at you, does n't she? plastic containing grave soil that was obtained from Mbah Dukun. It looks like the house is very quiet, only the security guard and the gardener are cleaning the plants in the front garden of the house and this is Sari's opportunity to give the land to the gardener who is also planting plants in the front garden of the house. The gardener saw the arrival of a figure [Music] [Music] ghnyanya Oh [Music] is this the moment the gardener came to the front gate of the house? What's wrong with this, Ma'am, this is the land that Mrs. Karin ordered, she said that she was told to use this land. As a planting medium, the gardener accepted the grave land without suspicion and asked Sari a lot of questions. After receiving the land, Sari went home and said goodbye to the security guard and the gardener. Sari was happy because soon her revenge would soon be avenged, according to the news from her maid, Mrs. Karin. When you cook food in the kitchen, everything tastes stale and the smell is very bad. When Mrs. Karin and Mr. Jaya and their two children are going to eat at the dining table, they do n't have the appetite to eat because the food smells rotten and when they taste it, it ends up being stale because it's no longer suitable for eating, ma'am. Karin finally left the dining table and ordered her food online. From this incident, her maid felt guilty because all the food she cooked was stale and smelled bad even though previously the food she was going to cook was fine, not stale and didn't smell at all. Even so, Mrs. Karin didn't scolded her maid so that in the following days when her maid cooked all the food, it was all dirty because she felt there was something wrong. Finally, Mrs. Karin checked all the food ingredients in the kitchen and when she checked in the kitchen, all the food looked clean. Finally, Mrs. Karin went shopping again at the supermarket. to prepare the cooking ingredients one evening, Mrs. Karin suddenly felt pain in her stomach and it felt very painful and when Mrs. Karin was defecating, Mrs. Karin felt that quite a lot of blood was coming out of her rectum. Mrs. Karin was shocked. That same night, Mrs. Karin asked Mr. Jaya to take Buarin Peri to the hospital. When she arrived at the hospital, the doctor examined Mrs. Karin's condition. When she was examined, the doctor said that Mrs. Karin was not experiencing any pain. Suddenly, Mrs. Karin was shocked and the doctor only gave her a short pain reliever. The story is that Mrs. Karin's first child, Galang, had a very high fever and her body was having violent convulsions. Finally, Galang was taken by Mrs. Karin to the hospital, but at that time Mr. Jaya was not at home, he was going with Sari to who knows where, finally, Bukarin was helped. The security guard took him to Galang Hospital and he was treated in hospital because the heat was very high and when he was hospitalized at Galang Hospital it improved a little, but Mrs. Karin still felt excruciating pain in her stomach. The pain kept coming and made her unable to sleep. Buarin was strong enough to hold on, but Mrs. Karin still tried to be strong in front of her children. Buarin didn't show her pain in front of her children. After several days of treatment at the hospital, Galang finally recovered and was allowed to go home. Galang was brought by Bukarin to the house and when he got home, now It was her last child's turn to have a high fever and convulsions, the same as what Gang was experiencing at that time because of panic and anxiety. In the end, Sega immediately took Gina to the hospital. The pain was the same as that experienced by Gilang. Gina was hospitalized and was treated for several days. At Gina's hospital, her child recovered and was also allowed to go home as long as her two children were sick. Mr. Jaya never came home and did not come to the hospital even though she had been told that her child was currently at Jay's hospital. Today, S might have agreed to go home with her child. If you have the right, J is allowed to come to visit until one day Mr. Jaya comes home, what are you doing coming home, bro, all this time you have been everywhere, the child is sick and does n't even come to visit, said Mrs. Karin, but Mr. Jaya just kept quiet, didn't say a word and leaving Mrs. Karin sitting in Mr. Jaya's living room and Mr. Jaya immediately went into the room. At that moment, suddenly Mrs. Karin felt a terrible pain in her stomach and then Mrs. Karin screamed for her husband, Mas, please shout, Mrs. Karin, when Mr. Jaya came. approached her, Mrs. Karin, why is Ma so sick, bro, let's go to the hospital, now come on, finally Mr. Jaya took Mrs. Karin to the hospital and Mrs. Karin was immediately examined by a doctor. However, the doctor said it was still the same. Mrs. Karin didn't suffer any pain because the results were still the same, in the end, Mrs. Karin went home. When Mrs. Karin was at home, she was always moaning in pain in her stomach, so her children were worried about the pain their mother was suffering because they didn't want to feel constant pain. Finally, Mrs. Karin asked her maid to make herbal medicine to relieve pain in her stomach. It disappeared a little when Mrs. Karin drank the herbal medicine made by her maid. The pain in her stomach disappeared a little and didn't feel very painful like what Bukarin felt before. Not only that, her first child, Galang, suddenly also felt pain in her stomach and had a high fever. This time again, Galang daydreamed more often and sometimes laughed to himself and shouted to himself. One time, Mrs. Karin saw that in Galang's room there was a black pocong figure standing looking at Mrs. Karin with a sharp and very unpleasant gaze, but the figure The pocong only appeared for a few moments and after that the pocong's figure disappeared and left a cloud of smoke in Galang Galang's room, like someone in a trance, sometimes screaming to herself and complaining that her stomach hurt so much because she felt sorry for seeing her child in pain. Finally, Mrs. Karin took Galang back to However, on the way to the hospital, suddenly Galang's body went into convulsions with his eyes bulging and only the whites were visible and his body became very stiff, suddenly Galang's stomach became bigger. While on the way, Galang couldn't hold back the pain and finally Galang died while on the way, suddenly Mrs. Karin's tears could no longer be controlled and the car driven by her husband immediately turned back to her house and her child's first funeral was held tomorrow morning, Mrs. Karin continued to cry non-stop and sometimes Mrs. Karin fainted because couldn't bear to see the fact that her child had died in undesirable circumstances and that her father was going to be buried and was left blue and in a state that ultimately resulted in Jen Gang being buried in a grave [Music] feeling pain in her stomach until finally Mrs. Karin fainted and Mrs. Karin Mrs. Karin was immediately taken home to the hospital. Mrs. Karin's stomach hurt so much that Mrs. Karin became thinner and her body was dull and unkempt. Mrs. Karin also rarely ate because if she ate all the food that went into her stomach, Mrs. Karin would definitely throw up at that time. Mrs. Karin ate rice but still had a few mouthfuls of rice. Mrs. Karin vomited and vomited blood until it felt like her chest was tight. That night, in her room, Mrs. Karin was visited by a very scary genderuo figure with a very tall body and black hair. The figure stared intently at her, Mrs. Karin and her eyes were bright red. At that time, Mrs. Karin was sleeping alone because Mr. Jaya was in his room. Sari, Mrs. Karin was shocked and frightened when she saw the figure. Mrs. Karing fainted and didn't wake up until the morning. The next morning, her last child suddenly had a high fever and her body was having convulsions. Mrs. Karing immediately took Gina to the hospital. Gina's eyes bulged and her tongue stuck out at that moment. Gina had a seizure and suddenly Gina vomited blood. When she arrived at the hospital, Gina was immediately examined by a doctor. The doctor said that Gina was not suffering from any pain, while Gina's face had turned pale and her body was having convulsions until suddenly Gina was lost in thought and her body didn't seem like herself. Gina was like a person who was in a trance with his eyes bulging and screaming to himself. Finally, Mrs. Karin and the doctor held Gina's hand, who was struggling, suddenly Gina's head looked back, her eyes looked completely white, and Gina groaned. At that moment, Gina breathed her last breath. Mrs. Gina really Haya was crying and her mood was very broken because both of them left while her husband left with another woman. She was really devastated and hurt because she accepted this bitter reality, while Buarin also endured the pain in her stomach which didn't go away. In the end, Gina's body was brought home and the next morning immediately buried next to Gang's grave, while Mr. Jay can only blame Mrs. Karin for the sudden death of her two children, even though the two children were sick, they don't know what it was because the illness happened suddenly and they died in unnatural circumstances. What are you like? My children all died, you can take care of them, can't you say Mr. Jaya, that's nice, bro, you can only say things like that all this time, you go everywhere, the children are sick, you never take care of them, now you're blaming me, you're busy with your affair, said Bukari Naik apoplexy, come on, you really don't care about taking care of your children, you just don't care about yourself, you don't have to worry about being dull like that, where can there be a man who feels at home seeing his wife like this? replied Mr. Jaya and from now on [Music] [Music] is getting bigger and bigger with muscles. the muscles in her stomach were very clearly visible in front of her stomach. Buk Karin continued to moan in pain and in the end, Bukarin couldn't stand the pain, Bukarin died when Bukarin saw the figure of Kenderuo and the figure of Pocong and Kunti standing around her body while she was lying there. on the bed but when Bukarin tried to scream he couldn't and his body felt stiff when he felt his stomach being held by the figure of Kendero and suddenly he breathed out his last breath his eyes were swollen and his tongue became his mother's heart. It was very big that her mother immediately became anah and the next day Har Bu Karin was immediately washed and prayed by the body bathers who bathed her body. Mrs. Karin saw her body. Mrs. Karin felt pity and pity because she had died in such a tragic condition and it was not known what illness she had suffered, let alone how she died. an unnatural situation with her eyes bulging, her stomach bulging and her entire body turning blue. After she had finished bathing, her body was immediately treated. Strangely, when she was about to be treated, Mrs. Karin's stomach suddenly shrank by itself and her eyes which had been bulging became normal again. Mrs. Bukarin felt I was relieved to see her because her child was back to normal and the procession of putting on his shroud went smoothly. At that time Mr. Jaya and Sari, who were reportedly married, came to Karin's mother's house to mourn and they both accompanied her to her final funeral. However, because Mrs. Karin's mother already knew Karin's ex-husband's attitude and came with his new wife. Mrs. Karin's mother looked cynically at Mr. Jaya and Sari who pretended to be sad, even though in her heart Sari felt that she had won for her husband and now Mrs. Karin was the one who lost and accepted the situation. Very sad and tragic due to Sari's behavior in order to be able to have Pak Jaya completely after Mrs. Karin's funeral, Pak Jaya and Sari immediately left and went home without first saying goodbye to her mother, Pak Jaya's ex-wife, short story, a week after Mrs. Karin died, suddenly Pak Jaya was fired. from his company because he had made a very big mistake, namely by embezzling a very large amount of office money and in the end now Mr. Jaya is bankrupt and has no more work, whereas now he is suffering from the same pain that Mrs. Kin Sari suffered, moaning in pain and her stomach is getting worse. it's getting bigger, even if you just go to the hospital to check it out, Sari doesn't have the money for treatment, especially now that Mr. Jaya is unemployed and his car has all been confiscated. Their lives are now suffering because of their actions. Oh, they did it themselves. One night while they were in their room, Sari's stomach was getting louder and bigger as if it were suddenly wanted to explode when he was in his room during the day when he saw the figure of Kender, the figure of Kunti standing next to Sari's bed. The figures approached Sari when Sari was about to scream. Sari's mouth felt like it was locked and she couldn't scream. Her body felt stiff, while Pak Jaya Her husband was fast asleep next to Sari when suddenly the figures approached Sari. Sari fainted. When Sari fainted, Sari's enlarged stomach was eaten by the figures in turn and they bit her directly by Sar and at that moment Sari immediately died. the blood that came out of her stomach spurted out to the point where it came out, but Mr. Jay didn't know this because Mr. Jaya was sleeping. The next day, Mr. Jaya was shocked beyond belief when he saw that Sari's body had been destroyed and she smelled of water and was rotten - [Music] the stairs too Hah that's the saying what Pak Jaya deserves, now Pak Jaya has gone crazy because he has gone bankrupt and has lost his wife and children who have all died. Astagfirullah. Hopefully we can learn a lesson from this story and hopefully we will avoid using the name of a third person and remember that every good deed and bad, there will definitely be retribution, there will be karma, yeah
By Budi Setiyawana day ago in Horror
Comments (12)
Sorry, but I could not stop laughing as I was reading this. Your use of language is spectacular. I just loved it. Congrats on Top Story.
Well done on achieving Top Filth! 😁
Fabulous work! Loved it!
You would thing this situation would change after installing a dishwasher. It doesn't.
This is very interesting
Yes- this is just right! And once you move the fun will really start! Congratulations on Top Story!
Hahahahahahahahahhaha this was freaking hilarious! You made my day!
Hysterical! My wife's approach has always been to rinse thoroughly after use (soak if necessary) & then stack them up in the other side of the sink until you have enough to justify the dishwater. It wasn't too difficult for me to adapt. Now that we have a dishwasher, however, it's difficult to tell whether it's been run or not. And my memory's not that good anymore. (I use those with a rim, usually on the top & laying sufficiently level, to check if there's any water left over from the last cycle as my go-to for determining.)
LOL you're my new favorite writer. Ever. As a stay at home mom.... I understand EVERY WORD OF THIS ARTICLE. I don't have a teenager yet but I'll have 3 at once when the time comes. And I can barely keep the kitchen clean with 4 adults and 3 babies. The dishes are NEVER done. Ever. Even when I wash them all new ones appear. I"m going to lounge with you. Let's stay on strike.
Oh. My. Goodness. This was FANTASTIC!! Gosh you are such a good writer. The fizzle sizzle ffhgbt of the pan just killed me. Everything about this screams of mundane horrors. WIN.
Oh, I love that you gave it a go! This was a great story :)
My modus operandi is "There must be a better way than this" and that is often true in situations like this. Excellent story