With Dogs
2nd May, Story #123/366
No way out of this. The men's shouts were louder now, closer. Time was running out. She stood her ground, eyeing the bristling fur, the bared teeth, the pairs of intense eyes skewering her to the spot.
The dogs had skill, working together seamlessly. They spaced themselves so she couldn't watch all of them at once. When her eyes swiveled right, the beast on the left took a step towards her. When she looked left the one on the right moved in. Always inching closer, trying to get close enough to sweep behind her.
The one in front made the most noise, the most threatening display. As if to keep her attention there, and let the others move around her all the quicker.
Her eyes flashed, left! right! as if marking time.
tick. tock.
The dogs seemed to stand still on stiff, furious legs. Yet impossibly, they were closing in.
To turn is to die. Or to say it better, to turn is to die now. To hold is to die later. Isn't Dying Later what it's all about? For everyone? Across species, even? Isn't that Hope?
They grind Hope out of you in the camps. Or they try to. It doesn't work on everyone. Some found a way to keep holding on to it even if it was only a grain of it, like sand. Even if it was only by a fingertip. Sometimes it was some steel in their character, forged by the fire that was supposed to put them out. Sometimes it was something external, a person, a symbol. Sometimes it was belief in a god like Job's, who only seemed to have deserted them.
She'd not got this far by choosing the Die Now option. Always, always, choose to Die Later. Spin out another second, buy another breath.
Something whistled past her head and struck the dog on her left, then a thump to the right. Whizz, thump. Yelps of pain, and then now now now now now
sobbing
running
to trees
allies
safety?
another breath
freedom
dignity
hope
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Word count: (excluding note): 366
Submitted on: 2nd May at 20:00
*Quick Author's Note*
First, and most importantly: thank you for reading!
A Year of Stories: I'm writing a story every day this year. This one makes an 123 day streak since the 1st January. As easy as 1,2,3! I'm collating them all here.
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Prompts: Shoot, I am late with my May prompts because I am working on the April challenge! Bear with me!
Thank you
Thank you again! Especially if you are one of the wonderful people who has been staunchly reading these daily scribbles since the start of the year. I see you, and appreciate you 😁
I do my best to reciprocate as many reads as possible. If you leave me a comment, that makes it much easier. Thank you for your patience while I catch up with reads!
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Comments (10)
I can't concluded with a decision🤣
Very suspenseful! Dire circumstances but then that flicker of hope!
Nahhhh, I'd rather die now than die later 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Silly man. I read this in the wrong order. The illustration is great, by-the-by. I’m not tempted to pet any of them.
Ohh MAN! That's a REALLY good one L.C.!
I like that. Always die later.
Man's best friend but woman's, not so much. Great pace with this story.
This is excellent, and once again we're left wondering. Bring on the next. Oh, and what's with the cat story in the after notes. Does that belong somewhere else on a different piece?
Had my heart racing til the end! Excellent fiction! And congratulations on hitting the all empowering half-way point in your challenge to yourself. Here's the the next 123. 🥳
She should invest in some land minds to keep the dogs away, at bay! Or throw some grenades at the dogs! 😇 well written and fantastic! Very intense!