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The King's Men

A Story Every Day in 2024 5th April 96/366

By Rachel DeemingPublished 27 days ago 2 min read
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The King's Men
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"You must leave!"

Cyrus, breathless and dishevelled, burst into the small cool room that stored produce. Brother Mathias was wrapping cheese and placing it on the shelf.

If Brother Mathias was startled by the village boy's abrupt arrival, it did not show in his measured movements. He conveyed an appearance of serenity and calm.

Cyrus however was showing his emotions all too clearly.

"Please, Brother! You must gather your brethren and leave! Before the King's Men get here! They have been seen and are less than a day away!"

Mathias continued about his task but looked at the boy before him when Cyrus sobbed in frustration.

"Cyrus." Mathias stopped and focused on him, grateful for the distraction of Cyrus' needs over his own rising fear. "Sit," he instructed. "Calm yourself."

The monk continued. He found comfort in the work as he tried to order his thoughts. He imagined the peace he had felt at morning's light, when he had kneeled beneath the vaulted ceiling built to the glory of God and praised his Creator as the eastern sun threw its golden stream through the altar window.

It was difficult to concentrate next to Cyrus as he heaved, displaying the emotion that Mathias was trying to contain.

"Cyrus," he finally said, the boy having stilled, exhausted by the toll taken from the task he had been given.

The boy looked up, sad but bright.

"Run to the other brothers and tell them the news."

Cyrus leapt up, all signs of fatigue gone.

"And the villagers? They want to help too. What do I tell them?"

Brother Mathias shook his head.

"Nothing, Cyrus. You must remain separate. This is matter between Kings, and God's servants only."

Cyrus went to protest but the monk pointed to the door and in a voice of iron stated "Go!"

***

Cyrus' face was blackened except for the streaks where the tears cleansed. The water of loss should have expelled Cyrus' grief but instead, it was compounding it, as he watched the abbey of his friends ransacked by the men of God's anointed one.

The fire created in the destruction of the house of God was not the only fire set that day.

***

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A trip away has meant visits to historical sites and one of these was to a ruined abbey, the bones of which are still present and hearkens to a bygone era of prosperity and devotion, but which is now a sad relic, piles of rubble, supported by struts placed by well-meaning folk, perhaps Cyrus' ancestors.

Henry VIII, him of the many wives, was a British king and a tornado of destruction, intent on showing his might against that which would depose him: the Church. It held wealth, it held power, both of which Henry coveted for himself and which he resented being used in a way that would restrict him in what he wanted to do. And so, his answer to that was not to bow before the power of God but to threaten its earthly manifestation in the monasteries, abbeys and churches that prospered on his lands. No consideration was given to the people to whom these places were a sanctuary or place of worship or home. He wanted them dissolved and so, he made it happen.

I have trouble with the idea of kings being God's annointed ones when they do things like this.

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Rachel Deeming

Mum, blogger, crafter, reviewer, writer, traveller: I love to write and I am not limited by form. Here, you will find stories, articles, opinion pieces, poems, all of which reflect me: who I am, what I love, what I feel, how I view things.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran26 days ago

    This was so sad. Money and power make people do shit like this. Loved your story and backstory!

  • randy Davidson 26 days ago

    Cool talking about our ancestors, cool thought and it an historical story from our father's to know how we can save our creator but look today some of we don't believe in God's word till now.

  • Caroline Craven26 days ago

    Can definitely tell you’ve been visiting some historical sites. This was excellent. A perfect example of how power corrupts.

  • Cathy holmes26 days ago

    Wonderful telling of the tale to often repeated, even in modern day "kings." It's all selfishness.

  • D.K. Shepard27 days ago

    Great historical piece, Rachel! A powerful end scene after a compelling interaction between the two characters

  • John Cox27 days ago

    This story is a sterling example of the adage that absolute power corrupts absolutely. Really well done and evocative, Rachel!

  • Hello Rachel. I loved your story and the creativity in it.

  • Well-wrought! And yet the Church established itself through the very same tactics, did it not? Fire and sword? It may be that fire and sword compel fire and sword, and innocence get hurt. I seem to recall an apocryphal message, encouraging people to understand that anywhere people gather in unity for the sake of peace, they gather for "God". For my part, there is no god but this energy that never ends. How will we use it, eh? Even in this new digital realm of words and images now, we are using it to fight with each other rather than make peace, but it does not have to be. As a f00l, I seek to be a neutralizer, but would prefer not to be a sacrifice. A new era dawns. Why should there be a sacrifice? In some versions of the Tarot, "The Hanged Man" is depicted as "The Traitor"...

  • D. J. Reddall27 days ago

    "The water of loss," is a splendid metaphor for tears.

  • Grz Colm27 days ago

    Yes it’s hard to separate the two, agreed (religion and kings etc). I really liked your inspiration for the micro!! We unfortunately don’t have a lot of, if any - lol historical sights here ,so I loved what I saw in Europe even if it was only old castles and churches. The British museum is interesting too, but that was all over two and half decades ago. 😅

  • Andy Potts27 days ago

    This was timely. My daughter and I visited the new Faith Museum in Bishop Auckland yesterday and got talking about the Reformation, Prince Bishops, the complex relations between church and state. There's quite the contrast between these peaceful romantic-ruin tourist attractions and the calamities that made them romantic ruins in the first place.

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