The Damsel Trees
Whispers Of Another World
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as he spoke, the grass began to bristle,
sending signals directly to her roots.
apparently, her dander, like a thistle
relayed the message; she wasn't one to follow suit
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she hesitated, giving him the benefit
her slow reaction gave him pause, before he smiled
she let it slide, she was a kind of realist
she'd wait to see if his bark surpassed his bite.
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this summer day, he wandered further than before
to find the spot, located in a scene, surreal
a brief escape, an escapade through forest floors
a place of peace and nature was the grand appeal
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he'd found her once when youth was all he'd ever known
a tender reed left to grow both wild and free
a gentle kiss, imagination made the feeling grow
a flowering vine once started as a helpless seed
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he sat with her amongst the redwood saplings,
a cluster fondly named the damsel trees
where first they met, listening to the gentle babbling
all the stories flowing down the winding stream
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she showed him all the beauty of the forest
the secrets hidden deep beneath the soil
danced and twirled as the wind whistled a chorus
wrapped up in fragrance of magnolia oil
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he grappled with the thought of true surrender
amazed with her attention to detail
soaked up every ounce of nature's splendor
his world next to hers completely paled
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he witnessed a world emersed in conversation
though no-one ever once uttered a word
the give and take without needing cessation
a strange and foreign concept to his world
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observing her compassion to each small bud
she tenderly gave refuge to the bees
he couldn't understand where her name came from
why would they refer to them as damsels trees
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there was nothing of her, he'd seen, as a weakness
never did he hear her ask for help
she showered the whole forest with uniqueness
put her needs away upon a shelf
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he asked her once, while they sat contently
soaking up the sun rays of late day
she swayed to face him in a flow so gently
he'd forgotten what he expected her to say
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he felt the love she felt for him like thunder
she pressed upon him dew drops from the rain
then shielded him just like a new umbrella
flowed through him like the warm blood in his veins
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he began to understand and crave connection
this language spoken without the use of words
he begged of her the answer to his questions
how could he become a fixture in her world
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she reminded him to be part of the forest
sometimes death must happen to generate rebirth
he said he longed to be more than a tourist
he needed to be one with mother earth
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she lovingly shook her branches gently over him
until he felt the fullness in her limbs
teaching him the trueness of her being
the secrets of becoming, once again
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never again to wear the warm flesh on his hands
completely bare of the skin upon his foot
losing the title, he proudly wore as a man
connecting instead with what flows to the root
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he swore he understood the changes coming
willingly he would accept any backlash
gladly welcoming the path of his undoing
living somewhere within her abstract
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she decided she would grant to him his longing
setting neath her branches, fell asleep
the soft green moss over him, began crawling
till the forest’s transformation was complete
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his form began to mirror the shape of scenery
as she stretched her branches out over the lake
bark covered up his flesh, once soft and pink
and she waited for her lover to awake
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the life breath breezes gently began blowing
stirring up his spirit deep inside
the peace she had washed over all his knowing
he was living though he knew that he had died
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together now they sway into the wild wind
through the seasons together they stay standing strong
connected and forever intertwined
composing their own unending song
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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
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Comments (17)
I like how the rhyme helps this to flow throughout, and there is some lovely imagery in here Kelli, like “ she pressed upon him dew drops from the rain”😊
Congrats on the win!!🥳
So, so gorgeous, Kelli! 😍 Congratulations! I am so happy for you! 🤗❤️
A story of eternal and enduring love. Kelli, this was beautifully romantic.
A beautiful story told through a lyrical cadence. Lovely poetry. Congratulations!
Story in poetry form very unique , congratulations ♥️🎉🎉🎉🎉
Ermagodddd! Congrats. This is amazing.
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Congrats! Great twist on the prompt and well deserved placement
Congratulations on your runners-up placement!
Congratulations, Kelli! SO well deserved!
Fantastic lyrical tale. Congratulations and well done on your win
Congratulations on the runner up win!!!🥰🥰🥰
This poem is brilliant! Absolutely brilliant, Kelli!
Quite the romantic. Could this also be like Judith and Holofernes.
This makes me think of Ovid's tale of Baucis & Philemon who are granted their request that neither should pass before the other. When time came for them to die, the gods turned them into a pair of intertwining trees: an oak & a linden. The difference of course being that your poem is about the awakening of a human being's ecological conscience & desire to become one with nature, specifically this damsel tree. Marvelously told, Kelli.
Beautifully done.