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The Brilliance of Bobby Thompson.

Don't forget to brush!

By Lamar WigginsPublished 12 months ago Updated 12 months ago 1 min read
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The Brilliance of Bobby Thompson.
Photo by Olly Dow on Unsplash

Age is only a number…

I was the smartest kid on the block; I sometimes used those smarts for personal gain. My very first covert operation involved me and four other fifth graders who were all my neighbors.

On the day of the job, we rode our bikes through the densely wooded area of Chagrin Falls to reach a road less traveled to the city.

“It’s time, guys!”

We dropped our backpacks, some of which contained rope and homemade spike strips. We set them across the road and waited. Right on schedule, the small, white, box truck crested the hill.

All four tires popped as anticipated. The driver slammed on the brakes and jumped out completely flustered. We ambushed him with three shiny black revolvers. He didn't know they were filled with water.

“GET ON THE GROUND! And don’t try anything funny, Mister. I'm fully loaded!”

I instructed two boys to tie him up, while two jumped inside the truck to start filling the empty backpacks.

We escaped into the woods, barely wasting any time to scarf down handfuls of the glorious troves of candy we lifted from the truck.

That day was worth every last one of those cavities...

Dammit!!! Image by Jarmoluk of Pixabay

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About the Creator

Lamar Wiggins

Creative writer in the Northeast US who loves the paranormal, mystery, true crime, horror, humor, fantasy and poetry. Take a chance, you'll be thoroughly entertained.

"Life is Love Experienced" -LW

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  • Roy Stevens12 months ago

    I'm sensing a dental heist in the not so far future...

  • Tiffany Gordon 12 months ago

    WOW! Fabulous work Lamar! This is a masterpiece! BRAVO!

  • Stephanie Downard12 months ago

    Haha, this was great! Give me all the candy, and no one gets hurt! Loved it! Fantastic job! ❤️

  • Real Poetic12 months ago

    Lol this is absolutely genius Lamar! “Didn’t know they were filled with water” 🤣👏🏼

  • Cathy holmes12 months ago

    Lol. This is great. Well done.

  • Poor truck driver. The great Candy heist. Great story Lamar

  • It's all there: drama, camaraderie, thrill, and humor all packed into one microstory. Great job Lamar!!!

  • Now this is a heist that I would love to be part of! Chocolates are getting so expensive nowadays! Loved your story!

  • Sweet!

  • D. ALEXANDRA PORTER12 months ago

    Great twist!

  • Dana Stewart12 months ago

    A candy heist! Nice! Great micro, Lamar!

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