Stupid girl. Just leave.
The bruises all over your body, around your neck—they match the shape of his hands. Everybody knows.
He says he’s sorry. It won’t happen again. You just made him so angry. He loves you.
His words are weapons.
What are your excuses this time? You actually believe him? Still? How many times does he have to hit you? How many promises does he get to break? How many glasses? How many bones?
Will you leave by cab or body bag?
The woman in the mirror doesn’t respond. She just keeps putting makeup over the bruises.
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