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A Tender Heart

and a good cuppa

By AphoticPublished 10 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - May 2023
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A Tender Heart
Photo by Rifath @photoripey on Unsplash

We met in a coffee shop.

Our hands touched when you grabbed your drink. You took a sip. Said it tasted exquisite.

I said I liked your smile.

You said you liked my eyes.

It was love at first sight.

We started seeing each other frequently after that. At the market, the park, the pool, the pub, all your favorite restaurants, your apartment…

One day you came by to tell me it was over. To stop sending gifts and following you. You called me a stalker. A creep. You broke my heart.

So I ate yours. And it tasted exquisite.

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Aphotic

Horror|Sci-Fi|Fantasy|Poetry

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  • Harrison N.E9 months ago

    Love it

  • Suki Marek9 months ago

    I was not expecting that ending! Loved it : )

  • Katherine Pollock9 months ago

    Gave me chills. Loved it!

  • Sera10 months ago

    Wow..sweet revenge

  • Sera10 months ago

    Wow..sweet revenge

  • Gerald Holmes10 months ago

    What a great ending. I loved everything about this. Wonderful writing. Congrats on the top story.

  • Melissa Ingoldsby10 months ago

    Safety is an illusion, indeed. Well done 💕

  • Gideon10 months ago

    It's cool reading it

  • hayaadnan10 months ago

    https://vocal.media/01/why-sinus-is-so-common-in-pakistan-s914p0hph ‌ read mine too if you like.

  • hayaadnan10 months ago

    very nicely written.❤🌸

  • sleepy drafts10 months ago

    What a twist!! 💗

  • L.C. Schäfer10 months ago

    Bloody hell! 😮 Didn't not see that coming!

  • Alexander McEvoy10 months ago

    😯 Well that escalated Very nicely done!

  • Yusuff Adebayo10 months ago

    Interesting

  • Paul Stewart10 months ago

    haha, that ending, was brilliant!

  • Brannan K.10 months ago

    My friend Mr. Lectern would like to know how it was prepared....?

  • Rachael MacDonald10 months ago

    Oooh I loved this.

  • F. Leonora Solomon10 months ago

    Aphotic, this is legendary. I love how you manipulate words--that last line!!!❤️

  • J. S. Wade10 months ago

    Im envisioning the velvet red juices dripping off your chin. Your Diamond black eyes are unblinking as a slight upturn at the corners of your mouth exhibit pleasure. Great story Aphotic. Congratulations 🥇

  • "Knowing I'm on the street where she lives." Let's face it. She was always going to end up with Professor Higgins, no matter how cold & restrained his feelings.

  • Mackenzie Davis10 months ago

    This is wonderful! Every word matters and takes on a double meaning. “We started seeing each other frequently after that” — perfect example. It was a joy to read once and then again after that. Congrats on TS too! 😁

  • Poppy 10 months ago

    Oh my gosh. This is absolutely amazing. The twist, the way it comes full circle with the word ‘exquisite’ and the way the title completely changed meaning. Absolutely perfect!

  • Congratulations on your Top Story💖🎉✨

  • Heather N King10 months ago

    Wow! Romance! Thriller! Horror! So much happened in so little time. I loved it!

  • Dana Stewart10 months ago

    Wow, a zinger ending! I love it! So glad it was Top Story so I could read it. Congratulations!

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