How the Firefly Got Its Light
An Origin Story
Listen, my children, and gather around while I tell you how Firefly, that most mystical of all the creatures, received its light.
Firefly didn't always look the way you see on midsummer nights, oh no. At first, it was an ordinary beetle, rather small, with a tiny reddish-orange head and some black wings with a narrow stripe down each side. Not shiny and blue or iridescent like some beetles, not flashy like the colorful butterflies. Oh no, not at all. Just like now, you would seldom notice one clinging to a grass stem or the stalk of a flower during the day. Even in those days, they hunted at night for slugs and snails to eat, but an unsuspecting slug would never see it.
In those days, the stars were much closer to us, and some stars could even leave the sky and come to converse with the citizens of our realm.
One day, one of the most ancient stars named Hotaru, who knew she was dying, came down to say farewell. She was troubled, however, and didn't want her light to disappear from the Earth forever. Her light was a very important one. Whenever darkness or ignorance threatened to take over the world at night in the world of men, her light reminded them of the good light of daytime and the benefits of knowledge. But, living in the sky even though surrounded by other stars, she stood alone and had no one to leave the care of her light to.
She decided to hold a contest to see if anyone could be worthy of taking it. The winner would be whoever could hold up her light the longest and show its beauty to the best advantage. She called all of the animals to her and explained her requirements.
First, Bison came forward to try. He held the light in his mouth for almost a second before spitting it out. "I burned my tongue!" he cried. "I don't want to do this." And so Bison gave up his place.
Next, Eagle tried. He flew up with the light in his feet. Though he flew as high as he could, the light couldn't be seen in the daylight. "I'm sorry," said Hotaru," though you fly well, my light can't be seen at all in the light from the sun." However, Eagle was not sorry. The light was of great weight, and strong as he was, he had already been tired of carrying it before he returned to the ground.
Raccoon climbed the tallest tree he could find and held up the light, but soon he was hungry and lost interest in holding it. He brought the light back to Hotaru and clumsily ambled away.
One by one, each of the animals tried to hold up the precious light all through the day until the sun was setting.
Finally, only Beetle was left. The light was dimming, and Hotaru almost missed him in the dusk.
"I can carry your light," said Beetle.
"You are so small," she replied. "How could you ever carry my light?"
"I will gather all my relatives," replied Beetle. "You will see what we can do together that none of the other animals could achieve."
Now it was nearly night, but undaunted by the gathering dark, Beetle collected his entire family. There were hundreds of aunts, uncles, and cousins. Each of them took a small piece of Hotaru's light.
One by one, they rose slowly into the air. The starlight they carried was inconstant and moved from one place to another, winking as if to show all of the stars in the sky and not just one.
It was a beautiful sight, and Hotaru felt calm and peaceful looking at her light blazing here and there. Even though the beetle clan could not hold her light constant in their flight, and it was divided, it filled the entire night with light. They kept on until dawn began to appear over the horizon.
"You have won the contest," Hotaru exclaimed. "You may have my light. To remember me, I hope you will change your name to Hotaru and be known from today as the fire that flies."
Saying this, she faded from sight and was never seen again in the sky or on Earth.
Today we have shortened the name to Firefly. Firefly and his family still carry Hotaru's starlight between their wings in her memory. When we see them, we still smile and marvel, as Hotaru did thousands of years ago. Their silent spark brings us peace and hope for the world. The tiny lights rising from the grass at dusk remind us to seek guidance in the light of wisdom when in dark places.
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Natalie Wilkinson
Writing. Woven and Printed Textile Design. Architectural Drafting. Learning Japanese. Gardening. Not necessarily in that order.
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Comments (24)
Delightful read… I have always loved fireflies. Such a beautiful voice used in passing this fable on to following generations. I really liked ‘In those days, the stars were much closer to us, and some stars could even leave the sky and come to converse with the citizens of our realm.’ Thanks.
Not only did you reveal the mystery of where fireflies get their light, but you revealed what happens to stars when they die. This is so beautiful, I WANT to believe this is true - dying stars give their light to new fireflies. I know your story says it’s Hotaru’s light, specifically, but I’d like to think all stars surrender their light to little bugs here on Earth so they’re a bit closer to us. Artful and so very creative ♥️
Artfully done!
Absolutely masterful. It had every element I expect from an origin fable. The salutation and intro, the original form of the animal we know today, a cosmic being holding a contest for the animals, a little bit about each contender, and then the genius attempt by our hero. Followed by the conclusion, that touches our hearts. Fantastic writing. A great entry to the challenge. I’m really enjoying your writing!!
A well-woven tale, Natalie! I remembered an old Indian story about this. I like this version much better! Congratulations on Top Story!
Brilliant!
Loved this, such a great idea!
Great story!
This! You had me at 'listen my children'. This was such a beautiful tale, amazing job. I thoroughly enjoyed watching beetle rally his family for this. Thank you for sharing
So beautiful, I really love this story. It could be told to children and adults everywhere. Awesome stuff.
This was a really terrific story and so well written. Feels like a fable that's been around forever. I really enjoyed it 👏Pernoste
Love this!!🥹
Oh my goodness, I love this! It's so sweet and beautiful. Great job!!
Now that was rather sweet... Great TS!
Great Job on this Project and 🥳Congratulations on your Top Story 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
Simply beautiful, a well-etched and crystalline tale. Bravo and congrats on TS! I must subscribe. :)
"the fire that flies" just wonderful! Congrats on the top story
nice story my friend!
This was so enjoyable to read! It would be a fable I would love to tell any children I might have. It’s very creative and has a lovely message as well!
This is wonderful. Congrats on the TS
I share Dharshee’s opinion on the racoon, very cute and funny. I can see this happening, racoon's are my son’s fav animal. Very well written! Great work in your details and descriptions
Natalie, this was a joy to read! I loved the notion of the contest, with so many characters developed so rapidly but effortlessly. I grew up calling them lightning bugs (with a Southern drawl). 😂 Maybe fireflies and lightning bugs have different origin stories? 🤷♀️😏😄
Lol, I loved the Raccoon's turn, that was so funny! Hotaru was such a beautiful name and I'm so happy the beetles won the contest and became fireflies!
🌟What a BEAUTIFUL story, Natalie! ❣️