FindingThe Huntress, My Goddess Of Nature
This is a Flashku For Cendrine Marrouat's "The Emotional Moment in Nature Challenge"
This is a real Flashku(I hope) for the challenge below. The music Françoise Hardy's "Tiny Goddess" which I think is an appropriate accompaniment.
I will use the story below for the seven chosen words.
FindingThe Huntress, My Goddess Of Nature
An American friend told me about her.
I looked at her image and saw her beauty. She was a hundred miles away but I had to find her.
I found the wood but could not see her
Had she gone?
My spirits were down as I wandered through to trees in despair.
I saw the water and the stream swelled by rain and then the willow horse.
Skipton Castle was through the trees, the leaves of brown and gold coated the path.
And Then I saw her
I had found my Nature Goddess, and my spirits flew
I was grateful my fear of losing her fell like raindrops
She is beautiful and now we see each other as I make my pilgrimage every year.
She makes me whole and heals my soul.
This is another story of how I met her
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Thank you for participating in my challenge! The results are in: https://vocal.media/writers/and-the-winner-of-the-emotional-moment-in-nature-challenge-is. :-)
Thank you for sharing this, I didn't know anything about Flashkus until now 😁
great
I thought this was beautiful.
Beautiful woodland creations and a fitting flashku. Thanks for sharing both.
Great
That was well crafted, but the question that pounds is that: we are in such a situation, where we have to FIND nature...a pathetic reality, that I personally admit. I feel it's a social commentary to the contemporary scenarios...
Nice One, Top Story. Spotted, well crafted
This is stunning, Mike. Well done on a remarkable Top Story and great entry for Cendrine's challenge!
An evocative journey of seeking and wonder, intertwined with nature's enigmatic beauty
That's great I am reading your story I am happy and Impressed. keep up!
Your huntress fits perfectly with the challenge. Beautiful and congratulations on Top story ♥️
Keep up the excellent storytelling and connection with the beauty of nature!
This is beautifully written, Mike. Congratulations on your Top Story 🎉
Congratulations on Top Story!
I always love seeing your posts about this image! Gorgeously written Mike!
Ethereal! This is a beautiful story. Well done and congratulations on TS!
Love that
Great work, Mike! Beautiful Flashku and great subject! Congrats on top story! 💫
Congratulations on your Top Story🎉💯😉💖
Congratulations Mike!!
Congrats on the TS
Back to say congrats on Top Story! 🥂
Awww, this was so wonderful! I loved it!
Nicely done 👏🏼