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Doctor Vellichor's Medicine

15th February, Story #46/366. This one follows on from The Tale of Doctor Vellichor. They both work as stand alone stories, in my opinion, but not in the wrong order! If you haven't read Part One yet, but you intend to, I recommend you do that first. *Skip to the end* and I'll link it there for you.

By L.C. SchäferPublished 3 months ago 3 min read
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Doctor Vellichor's Medicine
Photo by Natalia Gusakova on Unsplash

He looked worn, his face thinner, his hair longer. Collar undone, shirt sleeves rolled up, his waistcoat laid over the back of a chair. The wolfhound puppy at his feet chewed on his battered shoes.

"It's done," he told black-haired young woman. The glow in her face almost eased the dread gripping his heart. "But I can only give this to you on one condition."

The joy in her eyes dimmed, her mouth turned down.

"You know our deal, Doctor. You give me this, I let you go. You know the penalty if he dies. He grows weaker every day. The cancer is..."

"This will work. But at a cost. He will stay like he is now. You cannot give it to him until he has beaten the cancer on his own, or you consign him to suffering. Perhaps endless."

She gulped. "I see."

He leaned forward. "You must understand. He could live many of your lifetimes. Maybe forever, unless some accident should befall him, or the effects wear off." His smile was wry. "We have limited opportunity for long-term follow-ups here. Think: what will become of him after you die? You have a responsibility to him."

She frowned, biting her lip. "I'll take it, then."

His eyebrows lifted. "Are you sure? It's only been tested on dogs."

"Is there any reason to suppose it would work differently on a person?"

"I don't 'suppose'. I'm a scientist."

"Then what do you suggest?"

"Take it anyway. You owe it to him."

Her eyes narrowed, her features looked sharper. "You could just be tricking me. Poisoning me."

Something weighed on his face. Sadness? Regret?

"I don't deny it's a risk. But look at Gilly," he gestured at the puppy chasing her tail. "You know how old she is, how big she should be by now. And look at me," His eyes met hers at last, "Do you think I could do that? To you?"

"So... I wouldn't just live forever. I'd be twenty-one forever..." Her eyes sparkled with this possibility, the life and death of her pet dwarfed by it. Ah, youth! So typical, so afraid of aging. "Or... it's poison."

"Essentially, yes,"

She picked up the needle.

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Word count: 366

Submitted on 15th February at 12.10 (noonish)

Part One, as promised:

*Quick Author's Note*

Thank you for reading! Please leave a comment so I can reciprocate. If you enjoyed it, the best compliment you can give me is to share it, or read another.

The story behind the story: I like to think this ties in beautifully to the beginning of Glass Dolls.

Long ago, before my grandmother was born, people's lives were short and often sad. People could live their whole lives never meeting their soulmate. The world was too big, there was too much to do, and too few years. People married young, when they hadn't travelled the globe even once.

Then, one day, a scientist made a miraculous discovery. We finally had a way to combat aging, and even death!

My story every day project: I'm writing a story every day this year. This one makes a 46 day streak. I am into week seven, with no sign of stopping or slowing down! You can find all of them in my Index post. It's also pinned to the top of my profile.

If you'd like to read another, here's my recommendation: Yesterday was Valentine's Day, so I wanted to write a story encompassing all aspects of love: jealousy, pain, longing, fear, isolation and assorted weaponry. ❤ Here it is...

If you're joining me on this "story every day" madne adventure, please leave a link to yours in the comments! Whether you're on a creative bent like me, or if you have your own self-imposed criteria, I'd love to see what you come up with for today.

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  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock3 months ago

    Back then, I might have thought it was worth it. Now, not a chance. Nah, I wouldn't have thought it worth it back then, either.

  • Babs Iverson3 months ago

    Fantastic!!! Loved it!!!♥️♥️💕

  • Caroline Craven3 months ago

    This is so good. I think I thought I was bulletproof and immortal at 21…. Not sure I would want to be 21 forever now though! Such a great sting in the tail and tale!

  • Gerard DiLeo3 months ago

    Could be both, agreeing with Cody.

  • Perhaps the eternal youth *is* the poison 🤔

  • Lana V Lynx3 months ago

    What a choice to make! Masterful dialogue, LC!

  • Heather Hubler3 months ago

    Oh, the choices presented! What a pickle! Loved the dialogue here :)

  • John Cox3 months ago

    I love how sad and humane you made the doctor, LC. That alone carries the story and elevates his compassion for not the puppy and the young woman. Really exquisite storytelling.

  • Hannah Moore3 months ago

    I thought "that puppy looks like our puppy - about eight months ago". What dilemmas! I love the questions this is raising.

  • I'm with Cathy, I can't wait to know more...great job

  • Rachel Deeming3 months ago

    Great dialogue in this, L.C..

  • Cathy holmes3 months ago

    Oh, this was a great follow-up. Hmmm. Does she take it? Is it poison? I guess I'll find out. Well done.

  • Daphsam3 months ago

    Enjoyable read!

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