Area 51
The secrets out
It would have been called Area 50 but some bar in Florida had already taken the name.
Thanks to advancements in 3D printing (plus sedating the guy I would impersonate) the stage was set to gain clearance.
"Good morning Mr. Schaffer." a gorgeous woman said.
"Good morning." I politely replied.
So far so good, I thought.
The fake glasses I wore displayed a digital map of the layout. Room 99 was first on my list.
"There he is!" the same woman said to three angry aliens. "He's not one of us... Mr. Schaffer never says good morning back!"
I fled...
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Lamar Wiggins
Creative writer in the Northeast US who loves the paranormal, fiction, mystery, articles and the occasional poem. Take a chance, you'll be thoroughly entertained.
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Wouh haha good one!
Good one Lamar!!! Great job!!! Congratulations on the Top Story!!!
Well done, Lamar. Loved the twist at the end. Congrats.
Great work! Congrats
Great work! Congrats on the top story :D
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YES! Congrats on Top Story, Lamar!! ❤️❤️
Lamarrrr, this is awesome dude - love seeing you dip a toe in a little scifi microfiction. This stands as a great idea for the challenge, but you elevated it with the pacing and vocabulary. Leads us right along into a strange crisis - bravo!
Very good 👍🏽 questions remain what’s n 99 did you get away
Dammit! Hate it when being polite backfires 🤣
Haha! Great story! Well deserved TS.
Nicely done! I laughed.
Ah man!! I wanted to see what was in room 99. And I absolutely loved the joke about Area 50 already being taken as a name. This had everything I love...little details, humor, suspense. Really great work, Lamar!! Congratulations on Top Story!!
Gotcha! Congratulations on Top Story, Lamar!
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Enigmatic and captivating, Area 51 sparks a sense of wonder and intrigue. The secrecy surrounding it fuels theories and speculations, leaving me curious about the mysteries it holds. It serves as a reminder of humanity's insatiable quest for knowledge and the allure of the unknown.
This is wonderful storytelling! Love it!! Well deserved top story.
Great job, Lamar! Congratulations!
Oops! 😬 lol. Great stuff. Congratulations on the too story
Lol! Nicely played! Congrats on TS!
Awesome ✨🎉💖Congratulations on Your Top Story❗😉
Congrats on the TS
Congratulations on your Top Story 💯
Congratulations on your Top Story Lamar!