Fiction logo

Adventure

A Microfiction For Eric Anderson's Unintended Fiction Challenge

By Mike Singleton - MikeydredPublished 10 months ago 1 min read
Adventure
Photo by Fabio Comparelli on Unsplash

This is A Microfiction For Eric Anderson's Unintended Fiction Challenge which you can read about and enter in The Vocal Social Society on Facebook here.

Music is "Adventure Of A Lifetime" by Coldplay

Adventure

He had been given a treasure map, and it looked like a simple task to find where it was buried. Everyone laughed at him when he asked if anyone else wanted to come and share whatever he found with them.

So he set out alone and followed the path marked out on the map.

He did not know this area at all but trusted the map and his own, usually accurate sense of direction.

He climbed higher and higher, this hill felt more like a mountain.

He knew when he got close to the top the was a bridge to cross, but he was fine with that.

Well, he was fine with that until he saw the bridge, a rickety suspension bridge over a very deep ravine.

His vertigo started to kick in, but he knew that at the other end was the treasure that the map was leading him to.

As he moved along the bridge, he saw that the cables holding it were not in the best state of repair, and then one of the wooden slats split under his foot. He held on and stepped over but was worried that he might not be able to come back this way.

He did not know what the treasure was, or, for certain whether there was any treasure. As he got closer to the end the bridge was in a state of disintegration and six feet from the end it gave way under his weight.

Hi jumped and crawled onto the waiting ledge, feeling a little like Indiana Jones.

Pulling himself up he found the shrine that contained the treasure he had come for, a heart-shaped ruby the size of his fist. He put it into his rucksack. He had found the treasure and it was all his.

He now had to find a way back.

That would be another adventure.

Short StoryMicrofiction

About the Creator

Mike Singleton - Mikeydred

Weaver of Tales & Poems

7(1.2m) ֎ Fb ֎ Px ֎ Pn ֎

X ֎ In ֎ YT (0.2m) ֎ T

Vocal Tips

Creationati

Call Me LesGina HeatherCaroline

BabsROCKDharCathyJudeyAnna

DaphsamMisty MelissaMa Coombs

Carol

Enjoyed the story?
Support the Creator.

Subscribe for free to receive all their stories in your feed. You could also pledge your support or give them a one-off tip, letting them know you appreciate their work.

Subscribe For Free

Reader insights

Be the first to share your insights about this piece.

How does it work?

Add your insights

Comments (8)

  • Old Malaya Travel and Tours6 months ago

    Exploring hidden treasures amidst challenges, just like our journeys with Old Malaya Travel and Tours. Discover your own gems among Sabah's wonders with us. https://www.oldmalayatravels.com/

  • Rachel Deeming10 months ago

    Nice. I need to do this challenge!

  • Oh wow, a heart shaped ruby! I wonder how he is gonna get back, lol!

  • Ian Read10 months ago

    A nice little adventure. Well done!

  • Dana Crandell10 months ago

    Well done.

  • Turn the ruby into slippers, put them on, close your eyes, click your heals together & say, "There's no place like home," over & over again. Well done, Mike.

  • Atomic Historian10 months ago

    Great job, Mike! I added it to the list

  • Alex H Mittelman 10 months ago

    Great story! I want a ruby too!

Mike Singleton - MikeydredWritten by Mike Singleton - Mikeydred

Find us on social media

Miscellaneous links

  • Explore
  • Contact
  • Privacy Policy
  • Terms of Use
  • Support

© 2024 Creatd, Inc. All Rights Reserved.