I’d rate this a ten. The script is believable and romantic. Two people who love each other more than life itself, share their love story through a book. The wife wrote the book herself, so the husband could read it. Their love survives through envy, long distance, and memory loss.
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I've been here, my love. Watching, waiting. I've wanted to come to you, but I can't seem to break free of these wrought iron bars. You must have looked upon my face at least a hundred times these last few months, yet your face never once lit up for me. Not the way I know mine does for you. It's like you didn't recognize me anymore.
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Comments (8)
Keep meaning to watch this.
I'm with Naomi. I need to watch it again because of this critique. And also Ryan Gosling.
I’m not that into romance, but this movie… 🥰 I cannot help but love it, and you nailed this critique. Got me needing to watch it all over again. Might do that tonight.
I've not read the book but I watched the movie. Ain't my cup of tea, lol! Loved your review!
I lost count of how many times I’ve watched this 🙈 I love their love story ❤️🙏
Beautiful critique
I've never seen The Notebook, but I've heard it's a must for everyone that likes romantic movies, so I'll have to give it a try when I can!
This is Excellent ❤️💯😉👌🎉📝🎬😎I Love That Movie 🎦