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In the Mix with YouTube
Music mix channels are some of the best parts of YouTube. They keep you company when writing or studying. They’re great for finding new music, without having to dig through tons of other channels, or Spotify. It’s often the best part of my day to put music on and write.
Atomic HistorianPublished 9 months ago in CritiqueThe Un-Welcoming To Ghana: You Don't Invite Someone To A Dirty House
Thursday, 24 August 2023 By: TB Obwoge Momma Ebo, (That's what I will call her) would awake around 5 am, I think, because morning wasn't my thing after all.
IwriteMywrongsPublished 9 months ago in CritiqueRap
Where did you learn to write poetry? I read a lot of poetry. That's true. More often, I listened to rap. While I like most music, rap will always be one of my favorite genres. It has taught me more than rhythm and rhyme. It’s taught me about the world.
Atomic HistorianPublished 9 months ago in CritiqueThe Calvin Stickers
Let the grifters grift. It’s their only gift. You work hard on your craft. You spend hours on your craft. Just for someone to drop a link. Or worse, they drop something unrelated. It stinks. Maybe Bill Watterson was right, when he chose to ignore the sticker grifters. We’ll see.
Atomic HistorianPublished 9 months ago in CritiqueDoes size matter?
Does size matter? Am I critiquing an actual work here? Nope. Just expressing a thought. How big should a link be at the end of an article? I often like my pics for covers, because some Unsplash images make links too large when linked at the bottom of an article.
Atomic HistorianPublished 9 months ago in CritiqueEthereal Symphony
In this captivating artwork, luminous strokes dance gracefully, forming a breathtaking play of light. Yet, while composition echoes brilliance, an opportunity for deeper narrative connection arises. By intertwining thematic elements, this symphony could evoke profound emotions, ensuring lasting resonance in the observer's heart.
Peter TanjalaPublished 9 months ago in CritiqueShadows of Change
Title: Shadows of Change: The Niger Republic Coup Update In the heart of the Sahel region, where the golden sands whispered tales of ancient civilizations and modern aspirations, the Niger Republic stood as a crossroads of culture and history. The landlocked nation was no stranger to political upheavals, yet the events that unfolded during the summer of 2023 were to become a pivotal chapter in its history.
Ramadan JosephPublished 9 months ago in CritiqueSocial Media's Double-Edged Sword: Fueling Civic Engagement or Igniting Polarization in Democracy?"
In the modern digital landscape, the convergence of social media and democracy has emerged as a focal point laden with both potential and skepticism. Within this realm, the allure of boundless connectivity and unparalleled access to information has positioned social media platforms as conduits for personal connections, catalysts for grassroots movements, and catalysts for heightened civic involvement. However, this transformation is not without its detractors, who argue that these platforms bear responsibility for exacerbating societal divisions and fostering the creation of echo chambers.
Satyam MagarPublished 9 months ago in Critique"Unveiling the Truth: Is the Education System a Beacon of Enlightenment or a Tool for Political Agenda?"
The education system stands as a foundational element within societies, holding the enticing potential to lead us toward understanding and advancement. Yet, behind its noble appearance, a complex dynamic comes into view – a push and pull between its role in nurturing young minds with knowledge, analytical thinking, and values, and the lurking possibility of manipulation for political motives. This intricate interplay sparks a pivotal question: Can education be a radiant force, empowering individuals to shape a brighter future, or does it possess the capacity to be wielded subtly, perpetuating existing power structures?
Satyam MagarPublished 9 months ago in CritiqueCharlatan
When they get online, they look to see what they can find. Was their creativity ever there? Is it in decline? Writing isn’t hard. It comes with ease. It takes no more effort than to blow a breeze. Now we question all you’ve created. Was it yours, or just imitated?
Atomic HistorianPublished 9 months ago in CritiqueCopycat
Dear Copycat, Thank you for the compliment. I really needed that. But could you try something on your own? It’s Wilde to see my work imitated. I’m not the greatest. But I really hate this when I see it. Please be more creative.
Atomic HistorianPublished 9 months ago in CritiqueChallenging Yourself to Overcome Writer's Block
A critique challenge? Just 50 words? Not sure about this. Seems interesting but hard. Fifty one words! Gotta cut something. That was fun. Another day. Too many positive ones. Should probably balance it with something else. Let me take it to the extreme, and see how many I can write?
Atomic HistorianPublished 9 months ago in Critique