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You weren’t my first. Probably not my last. But of all the others' past, you’re the one that’s lasted. Vocal, you’re the best writing platform I have found so far. You’ve helped me grow. You’ve made me mad. You’ve made me smile. You’ve made me the writer I am today.
Atomic HistorianPublished 9 months ago in CritiqueThe Giving Tree
The Giving Tree is all we need. It will make you laugh and cry. It will make your heart bleed. Published in 1964. Forever a work we will adore. Not many words. Not many needed. When we learned to care for a tree. We learned more than we ever needed.
Atomic HistorianPublished 9 months ago in CritiqueTerminator 2 judgement day
Terminator 2, one of if not my favorite movie of all time. A fantastic sequel that should be the blueprint for all sequels. Perfectly balancing expanding on the story and characters, providing fan service of the original film, and providing great twists throughout the whole movie. Truly a masterpiece film.
Dyllon RodillonPublished 9 months ago in CritiqueSeeking some Critiquing
Hello everybody! I'm looking for some extra sets of eyes to make sure my submissions to the Vocal Writing Awards are as perfect as possible!
Ashley LimaPublished 10 months ago in CritiqueFiction Critique Request
I woke to a lot of changes on Vocal again. I was not on Vocal a lot yesterday, Thursday, so I didn't see the new communities, Writers, Chapters, BookClub, and, Critique announced until today. I Only just found out the winners were announced for the Pitch Your Pilot Challenge. I didn't place - that's fine!
Paul StewartPublished 10 months ago in CritiqueKeep Criticism Constructive
Introduction Vocal has four new Communities, and although they are not for me, I feel I need to have at least one post in each Vocal Community and I can always find a reason to write about almost any subject.
Mike Singleton - MikeydredPublished 10 months ago in CritiqueFor Critique: Parasocial
I took a vacation to Korea in May 2023 and it was amazing! I went as part of a TrovaTrip package with a content creator I admire and had one of the greatest travel experiences of my whole life.
Alexander McEvoyPublished 10 months ago in Critique