Plot Development

Assassin’s Creed
Nothing is true. Everything is permitted. Not dogma but instead a revelation, those who came before leads Desmond on, don't give away your freedom cries Ezio. A brotherhood meant to serve the light. Seek the truth for yourself, requiescat in pace. The best games are with Altaïr and Ezio Auditore.
By Jazzy 3 years ago in Critique
Vampire Diaries - The First Book I Just Couldn't Do...
How the series, Vampire Diaries became a show, I'll never understand; I couldn't bother to finish the first book - I didn't even care to! Truly, a waste of a reader's time!
By Megan Baker (@thegothofsawpit)(@shadowsitheghoststrikebwr)3 years ago in Critique
The Giving Tree
The Giving Tree is all we need. It will make you laugh and cry. It will make your heart bleed. Published in 1964. Forever a work we will adore. Not many words. Not many needed. When we learned to care for a tree. We learned more than we ever needed.
By Atomic Historian3 years ago in Critique
~Fahrenheit 451!~ Telling the Truth!
~Fahrenheit 451!~ Young Ray uses machine imagery to construct the setting & environment of the book, making it masculine in form and attraction. There is no thought of invitation to Women as readers in his world! Ironically, this only leaves me with the recommendation to stick to his TV Show!
By Jennifer Cooley3 years ago in Critique
Legally Blonde 🛍️
Great Movie- Blondes-are Not Just Low estimations of a person - “Elle,” Considered Consistency to get Grappled with The Proper Respect, from a young man, she gained better than she set herself out for…
By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)3 years ago in Critique
A Game of Shit Shows
Hello my sweet summer children, turns out the night may be dark and full of errors - I mean, terrors. Yet none of that matters because winter came and left without anyone being able to see a fucking thing.
By Rosie J. Sargent3 years ago in Critique
WandaVision
A Marvel Cinematic Universe show that was hugely popular and fun to watch, WandaVision presented a clever take on loss, grief, and the psychopathology of superhumans. However, the twist felt unearned, a "switcheroo" instead of a satisfying reveal, and Legion handled the same topics earlier and better, without any fanfare.
By Megan Malcolm3 years ago in Critique
A Game of Thrones: A Critique
The "Game of Thrones" TV show series captivated audiences with its intricate politics and fantasy world, but its rushed final season disappointed fans who craved satisfying character arcs. The swift resolution of long-standing conflicts overshadowed the series' rich storytelling, leaving viewers wanting more coherence and depth in the concluding episodes.
By Emily Hart3 years ago in Critique
Game of Thrones Final Season a Game of Throes. Top Story - August 2023.
For seven seasons, nine families fought for dominion over the fictional Westeros in Game of Thrones. Some fought with magnificent purpose, others with unfathomable malice. In the series' eighth and final season, without consulting the master creator George R.R. Martin, malicious screenwriter's metamorphic bromides made it a Game of Throes.
By J. S. Wade3 years ago in Critique
ACOTAR
Centuries-old High Fae Lords falling in love with a 19yr old human who all swear like their "cool high schoolers." Abusive relationships, but Rhysand's actions get conveniently explained away while Tamlin is unfairly villainized.
By Sarah Glass3 years ago in Critique
Gone With The Wind
Scarlett had a true love, Rhett. Yet she yearned for Ashley. A marriage of convenience. War. Two dead husbands. Her parents...dead, her home in shambles.
By Novel Allen3 years ago in Critique
A Man Called Ove. Runner-Up in Critique Challenge.
Old man. Grump. Bloody youngens these days. Society is doomed. This bloody cat again. Why can’t everyone just leave me alone? Can I just die in peace already? This food is pretty good. Cat’s alright too, I guess. Suppose I have to save the neighbourhood myself. Life ain’t so bad.
By Renessa Norton3 years ago in Critique