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Pink Floyd đ Dark Side Of The Moon
50 years post release and receiving in excess of 18 million monthly plays on Spotify alone. A powerful testament for this timeless album that journeyed from cult classic to mainstream musical rite of passage, continuing to awaken souls beyond 3 generations.
Kayleigh Fraser â¨Published 10 months ago in CritiqueThe Seinfeld Finale
25 years later, and Seinfeld's finale is still a topic of controversy and harsh diatribe. I myself loved it then, and I still love it now; honestly, it was a fitting way to end the long-running series.
Clyde E. DawkinsPublished 10 months ago in CritiqueMount Rushmore
Or as I like to call it Mount Rush-no-more. Contents: Four dead presidents lording over the common folk. An unwelcome reason to ignore Crazy Horse.
Rachael MacDonaldPublished 10 months ago in CritiqueThe Enchanting Symphony of Nature
In the heart of an ancient forest, where sunlight filtered through a canopy of emerald leaves, a poet named Evelyn found her muse. Nature's dance captivated her soul, and she sought to weave the enchanting symphony of the natural world into verses that would resonate with the hearts of all who read her words.
Signor WilsonPublished 10 months ago in CritiqueThe Orientalism of Aladdin
Ever wondered why Arabs have always been portrayed as camel riders, sexual harem girls, violent men with thick beards and big noses, and always in the desert? Well, it all goes back to Orientalism. âOrientalism is the imitation or depiction of aspects of the Eastern world. These depictions are usually made by writers, designers, and artists from the Western world.â These depictions are literally made up, they are based on fantasies. Art, music, films, and tv shows have always depicted Arabs inaccurately, Aladdin is one of them. Orientalism is ingrained in the Western mind and media.
"Unlocking the Mystery of Human Mastery: A Comedy of Cosmic Ironies"
In the grand stage of existence, humans strut with pride, Believing they're powerful, on life's thrilling ride. Yet within their core, a locked abyss does dwell,
CosmicClipPublished 10 months ago in CritiqueA YA Story Looking for Input
*** This is basically an excerpt from a YA/Upper Middle grade story looking for critique.*** My main questions would be - from the perspective of a reader of this genre - does the story grab your attention? What needs to be added to make it more interesting? And, of course, if you notice any grammatical errors or clumsy sentences, feel free to point them out also. Add any critiques to the comment section, or PM if you would like it to be kept more quiet.
KJ AartilaPublished 10 months ago in CritiqueBuilderall 5.0 vs. Rapid Profit Machine: Choosing the Perfect Digital Marketing Duo
In the ever-evolving landscape of digital marketing, having the right tools at your disposal can make all the difference in achieving success. Two powerful contenders that have been gaining traction are Builderall 5.0 and Rapid Profit Machine (RPM). These platforms promise to transform your digital marketing endeavors and take your business to new heights. In this comprehensive guide, we'll delve into the features, benefits, and user experiences of Builderall 5.0 and Rapid Profit Machine, helping you make an informed choice for your digital marketing needs.
XcellentWritePublished 10 months ago in CritiqueA Sapphic Story I wrote in 2008
Carol Patience sighed as her back was fixed against the purple sheets on the bed. The seventeen year old thought it was a very strange way to celebrate her birthday. Lying on her bed, semi naked whilst her girlfriend, was somewhere around the flat. Carol stood up and stared at herself at the rectangle shaped mirror on the wall. She certainly noticed that her changes from two years ago. Never would she have thought that she would have a girlfriend, around twice her age. Carol was fourteen when she first met Grace Butterfly, after being bit by a snake and found her self out of planet earth.
Chloe GilholyPublished 10 months ago in CritiqueA Christmas Story Review
Since the Holidays are coming up, I thought Iâd review a film which I think is perfectly appropriate for the occasion. And what better title to review than the timeless classic known as âA Christmas Storyâ? Since this movie was released in the year I was born in, this is yet another film that Iâve known pretty much my whole life. And I have seen this movie at least several times during my childhood. Now, what made this movie so special is that it wasn't really a Christmas story as the title implies, but rather, it was a drama with a few moments of humor here and there. And once you start watching it, you will quickly realize this isnât your typical Christmas themed movie. It doesnât revolve around the legend of Santa Claus and the myth about him traveling across the world to bring toys to children. No, this is a more realistic story that tells us that sometimes what we want isnât really what we need. Originally released November 18th, 1983, this film is set in the 1940s, long before the time of the film's release, and long before digital age which we live in today. Anyway, the story in this film is basically a drama story told in the form of a narration by Ralphie when he has come of age, as he shares his childhood experiences with the audience about what happened to him on that particular day during the Holiday season. And needless to say, it was a Christmas that he would remember for a VERY long time. And let me tell you, this movie sure has left quite an impression on me that lasted for just as long. I watched this movie 30 years ago as a kid. And 30 years later, itâs high time I did a review of it. Though, keep in mind, I havenât seen this movie in ages despite that I remember very specific parts of it by heart. So forgive me if some or all of these scenes are not in the correct order.
Kylecovey SmithPublished 10 months ago in CritiqueFiction Critique Request
I woke to a lot of changes on Vocal again. I was not on Vocal a lot yesterday, Thursday, so I didn't see the new communities, Writers, Chapters, BookClub, and, Critique announced until today. I Only just found out the winners were announced for the Pitch Your Pilot Challenge. I didn't place - that's fine!
Paul StewartPublished 11 months ago in CritiqueRequesting the Ultimate Critical Thoughts of Others.
Remembering the life that I led the controlling asshole who took everything from me. I donât know what I will do with all this, it feels like nothing really mattered just getting out of there. All of my dreams had come true like the blink of an eye, writing my memoirs is what started it all. Finding the courage to leave Logan County, Florida. It wasnât until Uncle Elijah died the many years of therapy that would follow me all the days of my life.
Louise Blake-Michael (Risen Phoenix)Published 11 months ago in Critique