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Romeo and Juliet

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By Dana StewartPublished 8 months ago 1 min read
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Hatfields and McCoys – this one. Uninvited Romeo crashes a rave. Meets fair Juliet, from wrong side of tracks. Cupid owns both. Juliet’s BFF helps lovers, iconic balcony scene. Mistaken identity leads to Romeo’s banishment. Juliet goes with Padre’s plan. Text failed to send. Families grieve, forgive all but two.

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Dana Stewart

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  • The Invisible Writer8 months ago

    Love the hatfields and mccoys reference

  • Jay Kantor8 months ago

    Dear D-bud ~ Lovely selection ~ *Just want to say what a terrific heart you have for always being there for our little Village; including me. J-bud

  • Mariann Carroll8 months ago

    That was a modern Romeo and Juliet story worth reading. Great imagery use of words 💕

  • Babs Iverson8 months ago

    Wonderful absolutely wonderful!!! Brief and captures the complete story!!! Loving it, Dana!!!

  • Kristen Balyeat8 months ago

    Great critique, Dana! Excellent brief, yet full recap! 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽

  • J. S. Wade8 months ago

    Great critique! You def packed it in there. 👋🏻

  • Novel Allen8 months ago

    Didn't see it, but I got the picture. Great review, Bravo.

  • Harmony Kent8 months ago

    'Text failed to send' ... love it! Love the critique. Incredibly well done, Dana 💕😊

  • ema8 months ago

    This is great, I love it! "Text failed to send" is my favorite, it resumes a great and also stupid thing at the same time !

  • Tiffany Gordon 8 months ago

    well written & filled with all the juicy plot details! Very well done!

  • Brilliant and succinct! So much in here ❤️

  • Whoaaa, you managed to pack all that into 50 words! You're phenomenal!

  • Cathy holmes8 months ago

    That was really well done, one of the best I've seen.

  • Beautiful 🤩💯🫶🏾‼️

  • Kendall Defoe 8 months ago

    Baz Luhrman could not have said it better.

  • Lamar Wiggins8 months ago

    Wow, that was a lot info packed in there. Great review, Dana.

  • C. H. Richard8 months ago

    The Hatfields and McCoys saga captivated in 50 words. Well done ❤️ Love it!

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