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A Train Robbery

In the midst of chaos, bravery can emerge from unexpected places.

By ErmaPublished about a year ago 3 min read
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A Train Robbery
Photo by Melanie Hughes on Unsplash

The train chugged along the tracks, its rhythmic sound providing a soothing background for the passengers on board. Helen sat in her seat, staring out of the window at the passing scenery. She was on her way to visit her sister in the countryside, and she couldn't wait to see her.

As the train passed through a tunnel, the lights flickered briefly, and a man appeared in the aisle. He was tall and thin, with a gaunt face and deep-set eyes. His hair was unkempt, and he wore a threadbare suit that looked as if it hadn't been washed in weeks.

"Tickets, please," he said in a monotone voice.

Helen fished her ticket out of her pocket and handed it to him. He stamped it with a heavy hand and moved on to the next passenger.

Helen settled back in her seat, feeling a little uneasy. There was something about the man that made her skin crawl. She couldn't quite put her finger on it, but she knew she didn't like him.

The train rattled on, and soon the man was forgotten. Helen dozed off, lulled by the gentle motion of the train.

When she woke up, she realized that something was wrong. The train had stopped, and there was an eerie silence in the carriage. She looked around and saw that the other passengers were all staring ahead, their faces frozen in fear.

Suddenly, the man appeared in the aisle again. This time, he was holding a gun.

"Everybody out!" he barked. "Now!"

Helen's heart leaped into her throat. She had never been in a situation like this before, and she had no idea what to do.

The other passengers began to file out of the carriage, their hands raised in surrender. Helen hesitated for a moment, unsure if she should follow them. But then the man turned his gaze on her, and she knew she had no choice.

Trembling, she got up from her seat and joined the others in the aisle. The man kept the gun trained on them as they made their way out of the carriage and onto the platform.

As they stepped onto the platform, they were met by a group of men in police uniforms. They had their guns drawn and were shouting at the man to drop his weapon.

Helen watched in horror as the man raised his gun and aimed it at one of the officers. But before he could fire, there was a loud bang, and the man fell to the ground.

It was only then that Helen realized that one of the passengers had tackled the man, knocking him off balance and causing him to lose his grip on the gun. The police had taken advantage of the distraction and had fired a shot, taking the man down.

Shaken and relieved, Helen stumbled back onto the train. She found her seat and sat down, her mind racing with what had just happened. She couldn't believe that she had been caught up in a robbery attempt.

As the train pulled away from the station, Helen looked out of the window, her eyes fixed on the passing scenery. She knew that this experience would stay with her for the rest of her life. But she also knew that she was lucky to have escaped unharmed.

From that day on, she would always be grateful for the safety and security that she took for granted in her everyday life. And she would never forget the bravery of the passenger who had saved them all from harm.

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About the Creator

Erma

Hey! I'm a Science student and witting is my passion, telling stories is my favorite thing to do.

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