Travels through the Invisible Cities
No plot. Just vibes.
What inspires you to write?
Inner turmoil? Personal vision? Sights and sounds of the world around you? Other people's writing?
For me, it can be any one of those things, but perhaps my favourite is when another person's creation inspires me to create. And one of my favourite books of all time to turn to for inspiration to create is Invisible Cities by Italo Calvino.
It has been said that Invisible Cities is impossible to critique or even describe, and in many ways that is very accurate. The first problem you run into when trying to describe it to someone is that there is no plot, no real conflict, and only two characters (apart from the various denizens of the various cities that exist only in description given by one of the characters to the other).
No plot. Just vibes.
Marco Polo describes the various cities of his travels to a skeptical Kublai Khan - except maybe all the cities are one city, and maybe some cities in the Khan's great empire had airports and bulldozers, and Kublai and Marco are a pair of homeless men scrounging the remains of garbage dumps in a post-apocalyptic future, or maybe they are eternal figures, forever reclining in silk hammocks in Kublai Khan's opulent palace, and maybe there is an atlas that contains all the cities there ever were, are and ever shall be...
How do you describe a book like that? I think it best to stop trying, and to simply list a few of the poems Invisible Cities has inspired me to write over the years.
To begin with, there are instances of inspiration to write about the work as a whole, or about individual chapters such as Eudoxia:
Invisible Cities
Kublai and Marco in a
Rubbish heap.
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Riches found in
Conversation and imagination
Rusted flotsam
Ruined jetsam
Imagining whole worlds
In a thousand cities
Breathed out of asbestos and
Microplastics and
Cheap wine
As they stroll together
Between
Golden silver fountains
Battlefields of blood
Marketplaces of pepper and
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Who is to say
What world truly
Exists
Outside the
Ever-swirling smoke
Rising from their
Ever-lit pipes,
Out there
Beyond their lowered
Eyelids?
...
Eudoxia
This shapeless spreading
Stain
Of a city
Crooked streets
Crumbling houses
Dust
Fires
Screams in the darkness.
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Calvino knew the shape
Of the universe.
...
Then there are entire lines of thought that spring from a single phrase found within the book, such as the dead branches found in one of Kublai and Marco's conversations about past, present and future.
The Endless Perfection of Dead Branches
Dead branches
Stretch out further than
Live ones
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In the mind’s paths
Paths your life might have taken
Branching out
From choices made
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I could have stayed in
Hervey Bay
I could have stayed in
Sydney
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I could have gone back to
Singapore
I could have gone back to
Tbilisi
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Those branches of lives not lived
Stretch out forever
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I can see them
Whenever I want
And they will always be
Perfect.
...
Occasionally in my own travels I will try to think about the city I'm walking through in the way Marco does, and occassionally a poem will come tumbling out.
Here is one from Malacca.
City of the Strays
Turned loose
Living from scroungings of
Affection one meal the
Next
But healthy enough
For all that the
Life of the stray
Agrees with them
Here, at least,
In this place.
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Some cities
Welcome the strays
More than others.
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Lazing languid evening
Sun setting
Over the straits
As a romp of otters
Swim by bobbing
Their heads politely
As they pass a
Restaurant abandoned by all
But for
The tourists
The wanderers
The strays.
...
Ultimately, the best way I could describe Invisible Cities is a work of meditation. On civilisation, on humanity - or perhaps more accurately on the general shape of those things. A broad outline of life, for you to see and agree or disagree with as you please, in each of the cities Calvino describes.
A meditation on the shape of the universe.
The Shape of the Universe (Valdrada Strands)
Step outside the
Universe
For a moment
Step back to see it
All
What would you see?
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The shapeless spreading
Stain
Smoke and screams?
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A ball a bubble
Bulging out since the
Big Bang about to
Burst?
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Would you see
A tree growing
Out branching
In every
Direction?
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A whirling fingerprint
Of god
Full of whorling
Patterns?
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A single strand of
DNA
Twisting helix of
All creation?
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But DNA (remember)
Has two strands
Twisting
Around one another -
Would you see it
If you stepped back
Far enough?
A second universe
Mirrored like Valdrada
Twisting forever
Around our own
Double helix
Together but never
Touching but for
Hidden bridges
Dependent but always
Apart
If you stepped back
Far enough
Would you see those
Hidden bridges linking
Life to life like hempen-rope Octavia
Linking our
Universe
To its twisting twin?
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What life would spring
From such mirroring
Strands?
About the Creator
Roderick Makim
Read one too many adventure stories as a child and decided I'd make that my life.
I grew up on a cattle station in the Australian Outback and decided to spend the rest of my life seeing the rest of the world.
For more: www.roderickmakim.com
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