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Stop Creating Dystopian Stories. Stop it. You're not helping.

Science-based article on how the collective mind of mass consciousness impacts our world and reality.

By ARCPublished 9 months ago Updated 9 months ago 7 min read
Top Story - August 2023
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Stop Creating Dystopian Stories. Stop it. You're not helping.
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The human mind is a powerful force. Perhaps the most powerful force in creation.

We can convince ourselves that sugar pills are medicine and heal ourselves via The Placebo Effect using only the power of our mind.

On a quantum level, The Observer Effect demonstrates there is no such thing as 'objective reality' because every phenomenon which is observed... is changed through the (subjective) process of observation. Such is the power of the human mind.

Such is the power of Consciousness.

Consciousness is the 'stuff' of which the human mind is made. Our brain is the tool by which Consciousness is processed. Like a light bulb is the tool by which electricity is processed. The light bulb is not electricity itself, merely its channel. So the brain is our human tool which channels Consciousness. The Electricity of the Mind.

You don't need to be a subscriber to a belief in a religious God to be able to understand the objective, scientific power of the phrase:

I Am.

Whatever follows that magical phrase... becomes.

So whether your approach to the power of the idea of I Am has a religious foundation or a scientific one, both sides of the conversation can agree that there is Phenomenal Cosmic Power lamped in that two-word, three-letter phrase.

What this has to do with writing dystopian stories

When we use our creative energy - our Consciousness - to craft imaginary dystopian worlds, we scientifically add energy - amplify - the idea of a dystopian world in our world.

We 'I Am/We Are' ourselves into a dystopian world via the creative process (on the part of the author) and the power of suggestion (to the reader/audience).

"But it's just imaginary," one may suggest in reply (if you'll forgive the straw man exercise).

The light bulb was 'just imaginary' before it was real.

The television was 'just imaginary' before it was real.

The Internet was 'just imaginary' before it was real.

Imagination is not no-thing. Imagination is thought. Thought is Consciousness. Phenomenal Cosmic Power, remember?

When we use our imagination to create dystopian worlds, we are scientifically amplifying the likelihood of creating a dystopia in our real world. We are 'adding mass' to the potential reality of a(n even more pronounced) dystopia on earth in a very real way.

The Psychology Behind Dystopian Creativity

Put simply, the psychology behind dystopian creativity is understandable.

Example: Game of Thrones.

GoT is one of my favorite book series and was (through Season 5) one of the greatest television shows ever to have been made.

Without question, it was one of the most successful television shows ever to have been made.

Why?

Because the world of Essos (Westeros) is absolutely miserable.

So, the psychology behind the appeal of dystopian creativity is simple:

Watching GoT, we see a world that is worse than our own. This helps us feel better about our world.

It generates a sense of faux-relief when the episode of GoT ends and we return to our own world, which is full of awful things happening, but hey, at least we're not getting roasted by a dragon or betrayed and murdered on the toilet by a family member!

This is understandable. Our current world is a dumpster fire of planetary proportions - literally and metaphorically. The impulse to take some time out of our day to spend a few moments in a place that's shittier than our world is an understandable escape reflex and coping mechanism.

Problem is: Then we do nothing to make the truly sub-par / shitty aspects of our world better in real life.

The faux-relief we get from watching/reading/spending time in a world that is more awful than our own robs us of our energy and motivation to enact actual change in our real world. *(see footnote/sidenote at bottom)

Furthermore (one more straw man, if you'll indulge), "What's the big deal? It's just a TV show/book/video game."

Think of what a sensation Game of Thrones was. Tens of millions of people followed that show ravenously. And GoT is just one show. Whether you were a fan of GoT specifically or not, take a moment to acknowledge the power our entertainment (in the form of film/TV/books/video games/sports/music) has to unify us under one cause.

Now, imagine for a moment if - instead of 10,000,000+ people discussing an imaginary world steeped in misery... imagine if those same 10,000,000+ people were discussing an imaginary world steeped in enlightened ideals.

Imagine if the countless forums, YouTube, Reddit & Discord channels, and media outlets were all discussing [the author's] masterful crafting of a society that was not only thriving, but holistic, realistic, and how it might actually be achievable; discussing [the characters'] relationships with one another as constructive, open, and healthy; discussing [what might happen next] in the vein of all the amazing, mind-blowing potential outcomes.

^That's not boring. That's damn good television, if done correctly.

The truth is: We have very little practice at creating entertainment that does the above in any way (much less does it well). To date, Star Trek & Ted Lasso are two of our only examples of this phenomenon being done well and reaching a state of mass popularity.

Challenge: Create Something Better

The bright side of this conversation is that this overall phenomenon is a coin with both a heads and a tails side.

While it's true we can use our imagination to create a deteriorating/dystopian society (tails), it is also true we can use our imagination and creativity to craft and build a pathway toward a more enlightened/utopian society (heads).

So, I challenge every writer - on Vocal and beyond - who has had the impulse to craft a dystopian work:

What if you applied your Phenomenal Cosmic Powers of imagination and creativity to craft a story which lays out a plan for a more enlightened/utopian society?

When I use the word 'utopian', I do not mean some pie-in-the-sky, head-in-the-clouds fantasy that would never work. I mean ground it in reality and science. Make it gritty and visceral. Make us believe it. Make us believe that your creation - or something like it - just might be possible... if we work together to achieve it.

Whether we create a dystopian future or a utopian future is up to us.

As writers, we have embraced our role in the world: To Create.

Only you can decide whether you want to use your Creative Power to make the world a brighter or a darker experience -- for you, and for all.

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*(Footnote/Sidenote: Dramatic Television does this formulaically, by the way. Keep an eye out for it in all your favorite TV shows. Star Trek & Ted Lasso are two of the only shows ever made (so far) which break this formula and leave the viewer genuinely feeling uplifted, inspired, and healthily-optimistic about life after watching them.)

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Author's Note: (8/8/23 - 24 hours after original publication)

This article is not suggesting there is no benefit in dystopian writing - past, present, or future. There is great benefit in dystopian writing via the lens of contrast (we know what we want more clearly when we bounce off of that which we do not want).

What this article is suggesting is that we balance the scales by adding in some additional creativity toward a more enlightened/utopian society. Currently, our society focuses almost exclusively on dystopian creativity as it pertains to this conversation (of utopian vs. dystopian).

For writers/artists/creatives who gain benefit from channeling dystopian energy through creativity, it is good to continue.

For writers/artists/creatives who don't have a strong pull in one direction or another but would be writing/creating dystopian work merely for the potential commercial success of it (aka: because it's trendy) - these are the dystopian creations we can do without. And these are the writers/artists/creatives I'm challenging to reach for something else.

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  • Lamar Wiggins8 months ago

    I'm with you on the power of consciousness. Thought are things and thought create. Couple that with the laws of attraction and you have the exact recipe to your point in this article. Yet, it goes far beyond Dystopia. I believe the collective conscious can release its power in many ways; not relying on human input more than evolutionary understanding of creation and destruction. We were meant to learn certain lessons. These lessons are impossible to grasp simultaneously. If everyone in the world were required to read your article, then I would say it would be the beginning of a drastic change in attitude towards the direction that life is going versus the way that life could/should go. There are too many people in the world, all of which have various personality traits that will guarantee our opinions remain divided. One side will never meld with the other 100%. As writers, it's our job to think about our creations before we send them off into the world. How does this actually apply to the laws of attraction, I honestly don't know or have an opinion. But I do agree that whether fabricated or not, our thoughts about our story are true to us, therefore adding ammunition to what may be manifested as a result. Great, thought-provoking article, Tony. Sorry, I'm late to the party on this one, lol. Thank you for sharing.

  • Seems to me like you might be a fellow metaphysician and/or Stoic. Great explanation of the impact of not only our words but also our thoughts. I look forward to reading more of your work. Congratulations on Top Story!

  • Kristen Balyeat9 months ago

    I love every bit of this, truly. I'm not a huge dystopian fan and tend to avoid it. I know they have their place in "entertainment", but your points on GOT were simply everything. If we were all chatting each other up about the beautiful and positive things we could have, if we all put our consciousness together in a constructive way, what a beautiful shift we may see, and it might just be micro shifts (having a better day, feeling more positive, less depressed, less anxiety) all the way up to the macro shifts (a better world, peace, utopia). The placebo effect is quite real, as you noted. There have been studies done on gratitude and its effect on our *brains*. Studies on speaking positively and negatively to plants. We create life and death with our words, so why not focus our efforts on what we want vs. the shite we have, or an even scheit-y-er version. lol! Fantastic article, Tony, and I'm always so grateful for the way you guide us through your work with so much grace. It's a gift to be a able to communicate/write/teach in the way you are able to! (Insert flaily face here) Also, LOVE the Aladdin clip– what a profound little moment in that movie.

  • Test9 months ago

    You make compelling points, but I think the impact (positive or negative) of a dystopian story depends on the overall messaging of the story. For example, 1984 was written based on what Orwell saw in his day... the signs of tyranny growing in society... and wrote as a warning. However, some current dystopian novels (no names) that revel in the horribleness of the dystopian world without a real message may have less positive impact. I do think that stories (even negative ones) that shake you out of a rut in your thinking are generally more good than bad. Thank you for the thought-provoking write 💙Anneliese

  • Sarah D9 months ago

    This story was very interesting, I loved it. Read mine too? https://vocal.media/fiction/stella-was-the-thing-dreams-were-made-of

  • Leslie Writes9 months ago

    You’re right. I think a lot of dystopian stories end with at least a kernel of hope of turning things around though. A new start. I agree with your examples, but what about ‘The Good Place?’ It explored the good inside ordinary people and they were able to reshape their word (afterlife). It was kind of a “never too late” message. Loved your story and the conversation it inspires. 💖

  • Thavien Yliaster9 months ago

    I remember checking this article out yesterday in the "Latest Stories" of the Writers community. Nice work You've done here, ARC. I will admit, that Utopian stories typically feel like dystopian stories in disguise. As the good is only preserved by so much wrong. Like how a manufacturing company can only make such good products via producing so much waste. Still, I would like to see a genuine effort put into making a gritty, realistic, utopian story. You make a great point about how inventions used to only exist as electrical impulses from out neurons firing, originally incapable of existing in the real world, but effort was applied in making it done. The words "I Am" are amazingly powerful too. Especially when You make Yourself do something. I will type this, though. I never saw the world of "A Song of Ice and Fire" as a dystopian world. I always viewed it as a fantasy world stuck well past in medieval times before they were to improve upon the very basics of modern medical practices. Like, sort of stuck in the "Richest Man in Babylon" time period, not Ancient Rome, but still far back in the past enough. For it being dystopian, I figured that without main central powers of the world, such as faith/church/religion still being in control instead of other forms of governments that were checks and balances to each other instead of relying upon kings, queens, emperors, empresses, royalty, etc. that it's a world that shows true human nature when people are allowed to do what they want with the only consequences being the way of the sword. Today we have the phrase "The pen is mightier than the sword." I say that phrase is wrong, because, "The pen is only as mighty as the sword that backs it up." Hence power is behind those who wield the most capable amounts of force readily at their disposal. Think about it, why else are militaries funded so heavily? Without a decent military most countries don't have their own form of freedom. Either way, nice read.

  • Joelle E🌙9 months ago

    Yes, the mind is very powerful. This is precisely why I disagree with this post, as much as I respect you ARC–bc this kind of thinking feels inherently fear-based. I like to think we can all do and create what we feel, and it is all meant to be and it all has its place 🤷🏽‍♀️

  • Faith M Adam9 months ago

    Yes! Agreement reality! I love this.

  • Babs Iverson9 months ago

    Outstanding and valid point!!!.Fabulously written!!! Congratulations on Top Story!!!♥️♥️💕

  • Lana V Lynx9 months ago

    As a writer of dystopian and absurdist literature, I respectfully disagree for the reasons that have already been discussed here. I don't see dystopias as something that will be manifesting into the real world but more as something that gives the readers food for thought and makes them change their worldview and actions so that they don't end up in the dystopian world.

  • LC Minniti9 months ago

    Good points made! Though I like to think that there's a place for every story. Stories that stroke fear and anxiety have always been a staple in art and fiction. Most humans gravitate towards the negative. Negative events have bigger real estate in our brains than positive ones. It's a survival thing, we like to worry about the future. What could be more human than that? There's a place for dystopias just like there is a place for cheesy romantic comedies and alternate histories and silly comedies. It can be well made, or poorly written, or simply redundant, but it does not mean it does not have a place. Though you're right, we need a balance. There should be more imaginings of utopias to tip the scales a little bit. As far as the idea that imagining something will cause it to become real... as a horror writer, writing about ghosts and monsters does not make them real... does it? ;)

  • Paul Stewart9 months ago

    While I love dystopian stuff...I think you are onto something with the "causing it to become" side of things. It's how I feel when people focus too much on the negative because it's real. So glad to see this got Top Story. Congrats, bud! You made a compelling case!

  • I absolutely loved reading this. Not only did you support your ideas and reasonings about dystopian literature and why it’s successful, but you brought forth a powerful reasoning for creating new content that showcases being holistic and thriving. I would absolutely eat up more thriving community content with holistic practices being involved, because that’s the life I want to see. That’s what I want to create as well, and I’ve seen how it works. It’s beautiful. <3 Keep sharing, Tony. You’ve got a great mind.

  • Chloe9 months ago

    I enjoy writing dystopian. It gives a look into the (im)possible future for me. And it gives a way to solve whatever is wrong with that (im)possible future. It also gives people things to think about, like how we take for granted many things that we have now that we may not have someday. Interesting article…

  • I think that one of the problems is that people want to see people overcome adversity, and often the adversity is provided by a dystopian environment. I have tried to write totally positive fiction and it is very difficult. Excellent article

  • KJ Aartila9 months ago

    Ooooooo! I like that idea of writing utopian! (I don't like that you've opened up that rabbit hole for me again to get lost in researching quantum entanglement/Observer Effect/ and the Power of Consciousness & the human mind, etc - here I go .......... 😍

  • Naomi Gold9 months ago

    Congrats on Top Story! 🥂 I disagree. We cannot have a utopia without first having a dystopia. All magic happens in a void space, which is why things must get as bad as they can possibly get before they can get better. People have to enter a dark night of the soul, individually and collectively, before they can see the light. The tower has to crumble before it can be rebuilt. We are heading into very dark times. Much worse than the 2020 Covid debacle and economic collapse, which I accurately predicted and warned people of in vain. Next year is going to bring humanity to its knees, and I couldn’t be happier. Also, I’m writing a dystopian novel. True creators are prophetic. They have a vision. It would be stupid to ignore that vision and create what they wish they saw instead of what they did.

  • Real Poetic9 months ago

    Congratulations 🎉 I enjoyed your article.

  • Cathy holmes9 months ago

    Great article. Congrats on the TS.

  • Ashley Lima9 months ago

    This is a really interesting concept. I love dystopian stories, but I understand where you're coming from. I'm actually working on a fantasy novel concept kind of based on real world dystopian concepts (communal society vs patriarchal society) where the good guys come out in the end. You've inspired me to take some action and write my first chapter for the new community. Great article and congrats on TS

  • I get what you mean. I do believe that our thoughts are energies that we send into the universe. It's also the whole working mechanism of manifestation. While I don't have the patience to manifest anything, some people have told me if worked for them. Anyway, I digress. I was wondering what would you say about my horror stories, lol 😅

  • Yes yes yes!!!! I’m so happy to see you have written this article. You are exactly right. Are you aware of the movie “City Of Jews”? released in the 1930s in Austria. About Jewish people being persecuted and forced into work camps??? (This basically preceded Nazi Germany for anyone missing this link). And George Orwells 1984? That wasn’t a premonition. It was a story that enough people gave enough attention and energy to… and so it became. The rise of the walking dead and the world shutting down because of a virus? How popular that was?? How many people giving energy to that pre Covid times? The simpsons have a hindered examples of this - eg Donald Trump becoming president Dystopian movies are a current addiction in society. People get immediately defensive over why they watch them, with no understanding of how they are indeed CREATING the reality from this programming. It’s something I wish I had understood many decades ago… because I’ve suffered the consequences of that ignorance. There are very few movies I have watched (and the big key - having strong emotion whilst watching) that haven’t become my reality. Right now I’m literally living out Groundhog Day, The Walking Dead, Erin Brockovich, the many mafia movies I have seen, Rambo, the diary of Anne Frank, the hunger games, and the Celestine prophecy. To name just a few. I spent a long time programming my consciousness unconsciously. Trying to undo all that damage is work. Serious work…. Would I have understood this all if I hadn’t lived it? Who knows. But we definitely must try to help educate others on this….

  • Alexander McEvoy9 months ago

    Hmm 🤔 Very interesting take and one that I’ll have to spend some time pondering! I don’t know if I agree with you, dystopian stories can be very useful to the public consciousness, in my opinion, by claiming that the system can be beaten. If we examine the dystopian YA boom from a few years ago, those stories are ultimately about hope for a better world. That we can tear down the oppressive regimes and build something better. GOT, on the other hand, and this is just my impression mind, falls more into Grimdark than dystopian. My family calls it misery porn, a thing that people use to get a concentrated hit of sadness, anger, and other ‘negative’ emotions. But in general, I agree. People should put much more energy into creating hopeful stories about things working out for the best. Sadly, as we see in the news cycle, good news doesn’t sell. So we’re in something of a trap here, if we want mass appeal, heap on the misery. Though that is countered by Brandon Sanderson’s novels, which are generally about good people doing good things and events generally turning out for the best.

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