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Falling From The Sun

On stumbles, scars and second chances

By Henrik HagelandPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Top Story - March 2025
Reaching for the Sun and second Chances - Dall-E created on prompt from Author

The Sweaty Man’s Cap

twisted in the sun

tumbled down life’s ladder

Couldn’t reach the sun

.

The happy man’s trousers

soaked in blood

joy’s bubbles burst

through the breath of air

.

Body contorted in pain

Foolishness pays its price

Colors must wait

He curses his misfortune aloud

.

Put on pause

Others’ lives go merrily on

Spectator to the carousel’s spinning

When to climb aboard again?

.

The wounds heal

Pride took a fall

The horse snorts again

Come and ride me

.

Hesitant

Wavering

Comforting himself

Doubtful

.

A new sunny day begins

For a moment, forgotten

The scars life carved

Reaching for the chance

.

Learning from what was

Guarding against renewal

Grasping the sun’s rays

With oven mitts on

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Henrik Hageland

A poet, a writer of feelings and hope. A Dane and inhibitant of the Earth thinking about what is to come.

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    Written by Henrik Hageland