I'm sick; I'm twisted
I'm sad and demented
Trapped by bittersweet memories
Trapped and tormented
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Charmed by your captivating sight
Immersed in your ever brilliant light
An addiction to you settled in one day
And grew stronger with each passing night
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You shielded your mind; you protected your heart
Thought it as from past pain and you needed a new start
But as if already somewhere written in stone
You were there physically but remained emotionally apart
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Through countless tears and promised lies, all hope has faded
You manipulated your way in and invaded
Now you act as if you no longer know
This monster you created
About the Creator
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Formerly: Introducing Poetry
Writing allows me to release
All that holds me
Hope you enjoy the journey with me on a path to healing and growth!
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Comments (4)
Your poetry is really good and impressive. I really admire your work, and your wording is beautiful. Thank you for this!
A simply beautiful poem and inspirational.
This is very good!!!!
Thank you for this