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Your Eyes

A Poem

By MegPublished 8 months ago 1 min read
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Your Eyes
Photo by Iris van der Veen on Unsplash

No matter what you wear,

Your eyes shine through

In an intensive stare.

One that drags the watcher in,

To a fantastical swim

Leaving their head to spin.

Always soft, a little kind

Your eyes are thoughtful,

A key to your mind.

Never appearing twice the same,

A chameleon of colors,

Rotating in a complicated game.

One that is a mystery to begin,

No rule book in sight,

An even harder one to win.

What could be, the secret to your eyes.

Always too attentive,

Unravelling the societal disguise.

Maybe they contain two different hearts.

One with the material world,

And one where your reality starts.

// Thanks for reading :)

surreal poetry
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About the Creator

Meg

I'm here to explore the depth of human experience and to stop procrastinating my passion.

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  1. Eye opening

    Niche topic & fresh perspectives

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  • Test3 months ago

    This was such a wonderful poem! Loved it!

  • Great piece♥️💯✌️📝😉

  • Luther8 months ago

    Nice work great writing I’m new here so I’ve just dropped a few books❤️

  • Andrei Z.8 months ago

    "Maybe they contain two different hearts. One with the material world, And one where your reality starts." That is quite an interesting metaphor. I tried to visualize the eyes with two hearts. Honestly, it looks terrifying. Especially when you start seeing them pulsating and pumping blood through the vessels. But the metaphor is beautiful! Loved your poem!

  • Fahhan8 months ago

    My eyes! Jk, its a nice poem

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