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You’re Eye’s Excite Me

The bluest of blue

By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk Published about a year ago • 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

You’re Eye’s Excite Me

Your eyes hold me,

not cruel but burning.

They pull me into fire,

I can not escape.

They flash with secrets,

I hunger to taste them.

To drown in that dark light,

to lose myself in your gaze.

Each glance makes me tremble,

my breath stumbles.

Your eyes strip me bare,

without touch.

I stand naked in their storm,

the world fades away.

Nothing matters but that look,

that look that devours.

Your eyes excite me past reason,

they promise danger and joy.

Heaven and ruin together,

all in one stare.

Though I fear them,

still I beg for more.

Your eyes are the flame I choose,

the flame that keeps me alive.

How you’re yes excite me.

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♿ V+ Marie381Uk

Poetry has lived in me since childhood.

Ink spills the feelings words fear to say.

My poems heal, some haunt, all are pieces of me.

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    Written by ♿ V+ Marie381Uk