You Can't Out Run Fate
A love poem by me
The day has come
We knew
Your mum and mine
'Fate' they said from
two
A wet kiss you gave me
An eee from me
Baby us knew
Like we do
I did me
You did you
We both are
Over exes and the fake
You and I had to deny
Our fate
Came late
We ran
Can't out run fate
A love ten plus four
On a knee
Yes said with glee
On this day a ring you gave me
On this day a ring I gave you
I'm yours
You are mine
For
Ever
More
For life
About the Creator
Jordan Sky Daniels
90s kid
Flower child
I rise with the moon
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Comments (3)
Nice piece💯♥️📝😉✌️
Awww, this was so sweet and romantic! Loved your wonderful poem!
I loved every line of this! 🖤🖤