Yet Another Limerick
Because my brain is on strike from mirrors.
The story's complete in my head.
To translate to print I must tread,
over hills of broken glass,
while lava pools burn my ass.
So I wrote this limerick instead.
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Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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Comments (22)
I did the same thing.lol very true 😊
I feel the same way, gotta take a day to mend. Ah Limericks and Haikus save the day,
Cathy I love how this starts off serious and then makes one giggle toward the middle. 🤣 You are hilarious! This whole thing is so true! Could not have said it better! 😍
Hahaha! This one made me giggle. Nicely done, Cathy 💕🙂
Lol, this was me for the Purple Clouds challenge so I wrote a poem about it 🤣 Loved your limerick!
Oh Cathy! So funny because it's true!!
Same. I love to procrastinate writing… by writing!
Hahaha ah, the pleasures of writing, though mainly the pains. Loved this.
🤣Good one. I don’t even have a concept yet on the mirror one.
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Outstanding!!! Loving it!!!💖💖💕
Ahhhhhh the art of writing procrastination. Yes, been there!
Too funny!!
Ha, I like this it’s clever.
😂🤣good one 🔥
Haha! It really feels like that trying to get the dang story out sometimes 🤣
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lol think my head fell off 😂 nice one cathy 😀
Exactly!!! Well said!! Pry that sucker out of your head, lol :) I sneak poetry in when I can't get the fiction down, so same!
Pfffffft. You got this.
I think you have a thing for rear ends. It's a very interesting trend! A delightful limerick that bridges two challenges.
If it's just a transfer of copy and paste You should get started and make waste If story is incomplete and You still need to write Then You're in for a motivational fight Don't let Your opportunity go to waste