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Still Makes My Head Shake

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished 21 days ago 1 min read
Photo by Kyle Glenn on Unsplash

The decision came easy

the effort was hard

Your attitude breezy

you held all the cards

A love we once treasured

all too soon, removed

It lost all its pleasure

you're the victim?

So smooth

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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran19 days ago

    Omggg tell me about it! They always love to paint themselves as the victims!

  • Of course. That's in the handbook: "Victimizers 101 for Dummies". Always blame the victim & claim to be one yourself. I find it amazing how frequently others believe them, too.

  • Mark Graham21 days ago

    One way to get the point across.

  • Dana Crandell21 days ago

    BAM! Well done!

  • Naveed21 days ago

    This writing was outstanding

  • Babs Iverson21 days ago

    Awesome!!! Love it!!!💕❤️❤️

  • M21 days ago

    Love this. So true.

  • Paul Stewart21 days ago

    This cuts deep, well done Kelli!

  • Mother Combs21 days ago

    Another great poem

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