Feeling
Your warm
Kiss 😘
In the Mist
Of
This Winter ❄️ Blitz.
Freeze
My heart!
So that
The Memories, stay
Tangible
For a while...☃️
I want to
Remember how
My Love
Was Frost Bitten
By you!
A Scar on
My Heart
By Love ❤️ ❄️
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very good
This is simple and elegant. Great job
Oh, this was so beautifully done! I loved the images you created, and that 'frostbitten' line was gold!!
This was gorgeous and heartwarming!! Well done!! 😍😍❤️
As always, we'll written and very moving!!
Beautiful and sweet.
Oh, this is wonderful. Great job.
It's something how just a few perfectly placed words can direct the feeling of a poem. Great job Lonzo in creating a wonderful wintery dream.
Great poem!
Awww, this was a very wonderful concept for love! So lovely!