Winter Rains
A Curse
Winter rains havoc
on melting arctic ice caps.
How will my cubs feed?
About the Creator
Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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Vale Perficientur
"My tears need a minute to find the edges of my face. If you'll please excuse me." The sarcasm stabbed into Juliana’s heart. Antonia glared at her from the pit of the Lyceum as her student fought to hold back tears that had nothing to do with the pain in her fingers. “You’re better than this, again.”
By Matthew Fromm5 days ago in Fiction
Comments (27)
This was awesome!
Great work 🎯💯🤍
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Love it! Very relatable.
You captured strong, tragic emotions in so few words. You are brilliant!
Good entry
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I love the way you use question, and I love the frustration that rings through this short piece
interesting take, I like it
Excellent Cathy 🥰
Wow, excellent 💗🥰Congrats
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Sad and poignant, while beautifully done. Congratulations on top story and thank you for writing this!
Congratulations on Top Story!!
very nice.
Congratulations on Top Story!!!
Congratulations on your Top Story!!
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Awww, my polar bears 🥺 This was sad but it's the truth. Well done!
We can’t advocate this topic enough. Good job!
This is fantastic. I see another win unfolding lol.
Very well said, Cathy! Great job. ❤️
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Ooh, so powerful and poignant.
And that is environmental concern and the life of a parent in a nutshell!