Whose Time is Worth More?
A limerick about the waiting room
By Staci TroiloPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
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The doctor said not to be late.
That’s a no-show; we’ll charge the full rate.
So, early was I
but my efforts were nigh.
An hour the staff made me wait.
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The only limericks I've ever heard are risqué, and I've never written one. I thought this sounded fun, so I wrote five (in various tones, from light-hearted to serious). I hope you enjoy reading them as much as I enjoyed writing them.
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Staci Troilo
Staci's love for writing is only surpassed by her love for family and friends, and that relationship-centric focus is featured in her work, regardless of the genre she's currently immersed in. https://stacitroilo.com
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Comments (9)
This is so true. You know my surgery nightmare.
You really nailed that one. Such truth wrapped up in a limerick!
This is great, Staci. That is so true, unfortunately.
Truth, Staci! Been there for sure. A fun limerick.
This poem is beautifully crafted, with vivid imagery and skillful use of language, making it a pleasure to read.💓💓
You certainly captured a doctor's appointment
😂😂😂Spot on! 💕🙂
Oh gosh, can't we all relate to this predicament... Well done! 😊
So typical! Everyone can relate to this one.