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Whispers of the Forgotten Wine

A Lyrical Ode to Hope

By AlexxmarcerPublished 10 months ago 1 min read
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Whispers of the Forgotten Wine

A man stood forsaken, his heart entwined,

By a wine bottle abandoned, memories behind,

In misty daylight, joy begins to ignite,

Dispelling darkness with radiant light.

Through the rush of life, he finds his stance,

No longer bound by shadows of circumstance,

The dusk dissolves, a new era takes flight,

Leaving pain and fuss in the fading night.

The wine bottle’s a relic of the past,

As hope’s glow shines, its spell is cast.

No longer confined by a predictable rhyme,

Let’s break free, embrace a different chime,

With words that resonate, vibrant and true,

A lyrical journey,

both fresh and anew.

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Alexxmarcer

In the vast realms of the digital expanse, a passionate mind words with grace. Introducing "Alexxmarcer" a diligent soul embarked upon the realm of VOCAL...

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran10 months ago

    Oh I loved the transition from depressed to determined. Very well done!

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