Whispers
I love yous from the past
Your first I love you
was a whisper
and lasted less than a second in time
Hung between us like an eternity
as it shone a light in the dark.
Your next I love you
was also whispered
but more sure
as it broke the silence just once more
Then the third, the fourth
the major lift
Each a tick, a tick, another blip
Quicker now
and more urgent
I love you
I love you
Rapid and more furious
Steady and more sibilant
The silence silenced
A steady stream
of a sound that’s sure
of a love that’s a cure
warm and triumphant.
It’s a static now
the words are flow
of embers that glow
It is silencing all other sound
blocking out the world
A static and a blanket
when the last one it is said
the sudden silence is
like dead.
About the Creator
Leon Jacobs
Writing is a way of figuring out what you really think or feel. Naming the abstraction that can give rise to the chaos of existence. Words can lasso those stray thoughts and feelings - and tame them.
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