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In sorrow and rain,
How do you tell, where tears end,
And the rain begins.
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Luke Foster
Father. New husband. Wannabe writer.
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Comments (6)
This is brilliant.
Beautiful! This made me think of “Rainy Days and Mondays” by the Carpenters.
Very poignant and profound. I loved it!
oh, my heart
Luke, that was amazing!!! Love it!!!♥️♥️💕 If you have a minute, check out my latest Limerick, TEEN SPIRIT.
My tears are endless and salty! Great work!