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By Sara Published 3 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - December 2023
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where
Photo by Volkan Olmez on Unsplash

i lost myself

trying to find you

and now i wander

the streets

looking for your face

i do not want to see.

i sleep with my lenses

so my eyes burn

in the morning

and walk in a haze

so that every step

fades.

there is no room

left for you

in a world

where every day

is a war

so i make war

to forget you.

i fought for you

until my heart

gave out

and now i lie

empty

on the ground

waiting for you

to save me

but you will

never come.

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About the Creator

Sara

Don’t look for love.

Be love.

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  • Regina Flores3 months ago

    Absolutely loved it!

  • Andie Emerson3 months ago

    All the feels... congrats on your Top Story!

  • Kelly Sibley 3 months ago

    Wonderful.

  • Celia in Underland3 months ago

    Beautiful as always x Congratulations on top story. Hope all is OK x Know where I am 🤍

  • Hannah Moore3 months ago

    I make war to forget you. Brilliant.

  • ITS YOUR DESTINY 3 months ago

    Loved this , Thank you for sharing!

  • Tressa Rose3 months ago

    I love what your profile says, Don't look for love, be love. This was a very relatable piece, beautifully written! New fan!

  • Melissa Ingoldsby3 months ago

    I feel this one on so many key levels. A beautifully tragic poem

  • Heather Hubler3 months ago

    Damn that was beautiful and tragic. 'I make war to forget you' that line was everything. Congrats on Top Story :)

  • Mattie :)3 months ago

    Aw I love that, Sara. Love the cover image as well. So good! Congrats on top story!

  • Alexander McEvoy3 months ago

    That was fucking beautiful Sara Heart wrenching and sad Fabulously told and eminently deserving of Top Story, congrats

  • Paul Stewart3 months ago

    There we go. Congrats on a thoroughly well deserved Top Story, Sara!

  • So I make war to forget you. That line blew my mind!

  • Brenton F3 months ago

    i love the way you tell it Sara, it just pulls me in!

  • Paul Stewart3 months ago

    That last line is a killer,,,Sara...another strong piece from you. Well done.

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