me: the cool one. easy to love,
easy to let go. a curl of sage
you can burn to ease
the air, then huff it out
and see how fast I
flee.
*
you: the warm one in
each bed you rest in.
a slow burn that only
gets hot as each year
adds up. you
are held
by all your exes.
they look hard
at me, eyes thin,
grin bare. as if to say:
do not wreck this fire.
do not turn your back
to his soft sun.
don't you dare
hurt him.
*
once you know
a love like that -
bare and bold,
born of time
and ache
and pain
and care,
I see no end
to what you can hold.
even me.
even me.
About the Creator
Dane BH
By day, I'm a cog in the nonprofit machine, and poet. By night, I'm a creature of the internet. My soul is a grumpy cat who'd rather be sleeping.
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This blew me away great poetry
Wonderful words!!!❤️❤️💕
Great work, I particularly love the first stanza, it's such a great metaphor, the sage, clearing the air.