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When You First Looked At Me

My life felt the happiest ever

By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk Published 5 months ago 1 min read
By Marie381Uk 2026

When You First Looked At Me

You stood there like the world had paused,

Like every sound had lost its cause,

And in that space between the air,

I felt you noticing me there.

It was not loud, it was not fast,

Not something made to ever last,

Just quiet movement in your gaze,

That left me standing in a daze.

The light around you softened time,

Like everything was in its prime,

And I could feel, without a word,

A change inside me just occurred.

You did not rush, you did not play,

You simply let the moment stay,

And somehow that was all I knew,

That something new was breaking through.

We walked along a simple street,

Where strangers sometimes used to meet,

But every step I took with you,

Became a different world I knew.

You brushed your hand against my own,

And in that touch I was not alone,

It did not ask, it did not prove,

It only let my heart now move.

And when I think of where it starts,

Of how you slipped into my parts,

I know that nothing felt the same,

From just the moment you became.

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♿ V+ Marie381Uk

Poetry has lived in me since childhood.

Ink spills the feelings words fear to say.

My poems heal, some haunt, all are pieces of me.

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    Written by ♿ V+ Marie381Uk