When you finally go back to your old home, you find it wasn't the old home you missed but your childhood.
JBaz Twisted Quote Unofficial Challenge-
When love was dropped and shattered
And my poor heart lost to me
I returned, bruised and battered
To where my home used to be
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I found but shards and slivers
Of the child I used to be.
He whines and shits and shivers
And is of no use to me!
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Quote citation: ~Sam Ewing
Yeah, I went all sicko. I also decided to try a new poetic form and came up with an odd one. It's an Irish form, called "Ae Freislighe". So, I says to me self, "I've got Irish blood in me veins, so..." Here's the structure, as I understand it:
Quatrain stanzas of 7 syllables per line.
The last 3 syllabyes of lines 1 and 3 rhyme. (xxa)
The last 2 sylllables of lines 2 and 4 rhyme. (xa)
The number of stanzas can apparently be anywhere from 1 to infinity.
I don't know how badly I've butchered it, but I'm sure my ancestors are rolling in their graves.
Here's the resource I found:
And here's a link to the Challenge (Thanks, JBaz):
Thanks for reading!
About the Creator
Dana Crandell
Dad, Stepdad, Grandpa, Husband, lover of Nature and dogs.
Poet, Writer, Editor, Photographer, Artist
My poetry collection: Life, Love & Ludicrosity
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