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When you depart

“Feeling You”

By Corey W HarlandPublished 3 months ago Updated 2 months ago 1 min read
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Photo by Richard Pieniakowski #richiecamerahands

“When you depart”

I like to think of it, as if my

heart were the sun.

The earth and moon our body and souls,

dancing together.

Seen and unseen,

like our love.

Sometimes dim, but always bright…

"عندما تغادر"

أحب تظن بهِ، كقلبي كنن الشمس

ان الأرض والقمر كجسمان وروحا راقصة

مرئية وغير مرئية، كحبنا

بعض الأحيان خافتة، ولكن دائما مذهلة

-CWH-

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About the Creator

Corey W Harland

Retired soldier, writing as a therapy, hobby, and as a dream career as I go. I hope to fill this page with poetry, photographs, and stories that will inspire all who read to embrace their own beauty and let their own lights shine bright!

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran3 months ago

    Seen and unseen like our love. That line was so beautiful. Loved your poem!

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